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Old 04-26-04, 12:42 PM   #1
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Think for Yourself

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Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
Then society will find that its in need of some help...
So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself


Programmed into roles... indifferent to if we lead or follow
Full of sorrow for the fact it seems even our time is borrowed..
Morals swallowed... Eithics erased... Everything still set on race...
Expressionless faces... increase of idiocy and trying to keep pace..
Is this how we rate? An imperialistic... power driven state?
One run by a man with a reading level of barely 8th grade...
Yet we tolerate... Back a bufoon... Hate who we're told to hate...
Declining mental states ignorant to how our ethics dissipate...
So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes...
Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives

Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind
Then society will find that its in need of some help...
So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself
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Old 04-26-04, 08:28 PM   #2
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I enjoyed that one too, Native...I wish it was longer though.

Keep dropin cat.
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Old 04-28-04, 11:07 AM   #3
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Old 04-28-04, 11:39 AM   #4
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nicely rhymed


good lyrics


7.5/10


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Old 04-28-04, 12:28 PM   #5
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yo tite shit dawg, nice peice, good point, nice flow, nice vocad, aight hook, but woulda been better if it was longer....


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Old 04-29-04, 10:08 AM   #6
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Old 04-29-04, 01:14 PM   #7
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I Was Feeling The Whole Concept Of That Flow And Im Gonna Agree With Mentalz I Wish That Shut Was Also Longer Playboy.....1
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Old 04-29-04, 01:55 PM   #8
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Very nice. I'm glad it was short I'm not in the mood to read an enourmass post right now.

The message was very clear, and the chorus flowed very nicely.

The flow in the verses was kind of choppy, but for a text drop it doesn't matter as much.

Overall its a pretty nice verse, although you could have used some multis to help the flow

And if you could please leave feed on a keystyle called "Adrenaline In My Head"

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Old 04-29-04, 02:05 PM   #9
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nice flow B is was hott shit
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Old 04-29-04, 02:38 PM   #10
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hey man that was totally top man. you droppin sum nice shit here, keep up the good work.
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Old 05-01-04, 01:53 PM   #11
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Old 05-01-04, 02:04 PM   #12
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Yeah, the shit was pretty tight..... I think the flow was off a little but not that bad. The emotion behind it was strong and it showed. I also would have liked to have seen it longer.....
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Old 05-01-04, 09:43 PM   #13
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I may write another verse for this at some point
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