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damn now days we got a bunch of fake thugs...
2 me half these fakes r fucks...
n u kno wut i call them....porno thugs...
hahahahahahahahaha check it

verse 1

wuts up wit these fake niggaz screamin ride o die,ya realize afta da tru die,niggaz start reppin talkin good but tell nuttin but lies//
u wanna claim thug,than b down 4 a nigga n throw ya slugs,crips n bloods,
thses niggaz real da rest r jus porno thugs//
porno thugs get paid 2 act tough,make they audience baleeve they rough,
ive had enough,of dis shit,dis makin me sick n im throwin up//
niggaz got beef but deal gravy,shady niggaz,dat r scared 3 bust they triggaz n hit they woman cuz they 2 lazy//
thug passion,im da new assasin,ready n armed 4 n e fag trespassin//
im significant n rhyme malakolous lines,mind blowin,showin da tru meanin,cuz im possed by demons,bred through satan's semon//
i been locked up,n my head is fucked up worse than a retarded kids,dats
why da words i spit,r deadly fuckin sick//
yo its allik war,im da most feared across da young generation thus far,ive been hit by cars u think ya guns can stop me,a fuckin ford explorer couldnt drop me//

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im sendin rhino slugs,at these porno thugs//
u ask god 4 repent,when god repents 2 me/
im not da greatest,or a godest
n im not jus an artisit,im a arcinist//
niggaz screamin ride o die,n deny gettin paid 2 rep it,actin like they really carry a weapon//

verse2

niggaz reppin,sayin they carry weapon's,tek 9's n smith n wesson's,when really they carry they beat ass home cuz of bein taught a lesson,n countin they blessin's//
unroyalty,claimin loyalty,all dis fakeness,n whackness is annoying me//
i dont care if u crip or blood,cuz most so called thugs,reall strip in clubs,porno thugs,damn shits crazy hugs,of love,sellin drugs,dealin slugs,smokin newports destroyin our lungs//
well i dont give a fuck bout death,u wanna kill me than do it than,b4 i fuckin flip n kill u,n n e 1 of ur fam//
niggaz aint real,but "im real" like j-lo n ja rule,laughin at these idiot fools,u come 2 kill me but end up in ya own blood pool//
ima raw killa,comin back illa than b4,not hardcore,but dont do porn//
im silent n swift,like a weird mis,off swifty n kiss n im not jada im nuttin at all
jus a gust of vapor,usin da wind 2 write these papers//
its allik war sendin sluggah punches,da lines on my papers serve as trenches,makin niggaz turn into bitches,words so ill i dont need "punches"//
when u come 2 battle,its not a battle its a privelege,cuz i stay on top of da flow like dishwasher liquid//

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verse3

its me again,battlin gurls like eminem,wit a flow dat seem 2 neva end//
jus leave ya confussed like damn how he got so many flows,shit seems impossible,thowin bo's like ludacris,n got u knockin urself out like jadakiss//
shit hasnt changed,jus a worse deranged mind,stuck in da flow of time,dat trances u into my flow of rhymes//
i got a dictionary brain,but still got bitches givin me brains n teachin me classes,while im palmin they asses//
my words contravene,ya veins,into ya brain,givin u migrains,y u strain,4 ideas,my ideas strain 2 find pens n pads//
so u really wanna play thug,send n catch slugs,4 da niggaz u love//
r u really ready 2 lie 4 a nigga,or die 4 ya nigga,shed tears n cry when ya nigga dies n avenge ya nigga//
niggaz arent ready,u neva been ready 4 my release,so please stop tlkn thug
b4 i fill ya heart n mug,wit slugs//
2 many whack mc's,they flows stink worse than festies,n u want beef than come meet me,in santee,cali//
u nuttin but fag but fuck wit me ill have ya scared straight,u betta recognize cuz my name does hold weight//

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shits coo

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yea dis shit old as fuck so kiss my ass if u wanna tlk shit do it in a battle not behind ur keyboard bitch

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shits coo. and so are you.

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yo ruff there is no need to explain yourself to these bitch ass niggas that shit was fire holla at your girl

hey i think his shit was on fia

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ayt im happy 2 c dis meaningless beef is through thanx ruff tuff thug n fo sho shortie shy good lookin holla back peace oh bye da way if ya'll like dis one check out my others n my battle at frontline against eyedentdy thanx 1 luv peace out

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yo raw killa that shit was just ok, U SHOULD WORK ON URE WORDPLAY URE SHIT IS MAD SIMPLE

thanx check out sum of my newer shit dat i first posted dis shit like i said 2 3 yrs old so there's da reasoning...lmmao peace out

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Ayo That Was Pretty Nice Mayn...
I Mean I Dont Really Feel The Whole Gansta Trype Scenario But I Can Apreciate Your Lyrical Ability...
Flow Was Nice, As Much As I Dont Like The Concept You Did Stay Consistant And Overall This Is A Nice Pice Mayn...
~One~

wasnt tryin 2 show my own gangsta i was tryin 2 critizice sum of da fake rappers we got out now days(clears throat) n (coughs) ja rule/benzino lol peace thanx though peace

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its ok u need more work though

thanx for da honest opinion but plz give me more feedback help a homie out peace
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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plz fix your structure make every line rhyme with each other instead of doin on line ber bar...........and stop makin so many goddamn open mics lmao......

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