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Old 08-01-04, 03:58 AM   #1
Plutonium
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my screwed up keystyle

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here's just some shit to pass the time

my abilities are usual, but i rule at wordplays//
i would be a star years ago if Asians spread hearsays//
and if George Bush would just stop producing brainwaves//
then maybe aftermath would recieve more airplays//
hear me niggaz, i knew my rap style was twisted//
i flow faster than most pistons you not sure if you missed it//
nothing ain't too fancy, but nothing too defensive//
i stab at the most common parts of nerve-wreck depressions//
hear my whisper, i could just beat bitches silently//
and if niggaz tries to fuck with me, i shall react violently//
finally, am all-in-one nigga ready to play shit gangsta//
pop shit iller than most of them wall-street pimpstas//
sorry i missed ya, but i insist ya to bump into more tussles//
bitches with muscles, you attack their facial features with a waffle//
keep them muffled, and come up with the mocks worse then hogs//
"prostitute who sucks horses balls and fuck dead dogs"//

^^making absolutely no point in this verse
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Old 08-05-04, 04:46 AM   #2
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I'd like a response plz, just because some herb think it sucks doesn't mean i come back in a couple of days to find it all the way in page 5
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Old 08-05-04, 04:47 AM   #3
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beside, i'm a man who could always use some improvement, so i'd like some feed backsplz
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Old 08-05-04, 04:52 AM   #4
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not bad not bad at all
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Old 08-05-04, 04:53 AM   #5
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^^^speaks tha truth..............nuff said
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Old 08-05-04, 04:55 AM   #6
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not bad man i feel your pain no one replys back in mine either they just look and leave lol how rude anyways nice rhymes man
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Old 08-05-04, 05:15 AM   #7
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i dunno... i didn't like it but that's just my opinion. it seemed pretty played and basic but the flow was ok.
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Old 08-05-04, 05:40 AM   #8
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pretty good drop didnt get da las line though...
"keep them muffled, and come up with the mocks worse then hogs//
"prostitute who sucks horses balls and fuck dead dogs"//".....

otha than dat it was kool nice drop holla back nigga peace
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Old 08-05-04, 09:21 AM   #9
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i liked it, flo was koo but da ryms were a lil played but it was still koo man, nice piece dawg, keep postin
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Old 08-06-04, 01:26 AM   #10
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