yo, yo, here we go hoe, agen n agen, im not yo frend, neva wanted to b, im here to please me , neva wanted yo ass neways,
i remember dose hard ass days, w/e u thought u cud own me, you wanted US befo u known me,
now look yo dumass waited to long, now ur singin da cry me a riva song, guess what i don t wana hear it,
turn on "Bitch were done" n blare it, turn it up so u undastand clearly, im done bitch dont come near me,
i used to b all mushy, but i jus wanted sum pussy, or hed or sumthin, neva saw yo bed or nuthin,
dam 2 months n i still had desert dick, so i went wit yo frend n she made my shiit slip,
it was drehcned in salava, imma kill evry1 n b da only surviva, imma go suicidal, make rich wite families look at da holy bible,
i hope u fuckin cry, cus it will b yo last tear cus u bout die, cut out evry fukin freckle out of yo face, so theres no cheek jus a space,
so i can see yo insides, then ull see my headlights, then BANG u fly away, then wen u gone ill spit on yo grave,
bitch u cut me deep, shit i cant evn sleep, i will afta u take da long nap, u no da 1 where u dont come back,
n neva wake up, jus cus u ded dont mean we cant fuck, its good for me u cant struggle and yell rape, n u cant fite it wen i cova ui in tape,
its ok gurl open yo shit wide, c if u was alive u wud of cried, o i 4got i lied, theres sumthin i tired to hide,
i fuckin love u, but were through , u jus dont undastand, fuck yo otha man, i want u n me to b da real thing, i wana give u dat ring,
but no , hoe, we no mo, fuck it doe, were done evrythin gota cum to a end right, jus like yo life is tonite.


yo let me get some feedback on this

let me get some feedback on dis man so i can elvate my shit

i tryed to rap yer shit out to the beat lean back but i couldent the flow matched in all but it was hard to read yer words you should spell them at bit better k im gonna finsh reading this song ok and ill tell you if its good k

man that was wake shit i didnt even finsh reading it cuz it was to much of me see lee he and shit like that you gotta have some more bigger words like straight rate late and so on but you should keep tryin i think yer alright but man why did you poll against me i had the shits goin on he didnt i would of voted for me cuz i had flow but you should check out my song we get it on the finshed one its dope

oo iite, yea if it fits try doin dat shit

i feel it n jus ask u in pm bout doin a song sorta like dat bout our past hoes who,lied,cheated,played yotta yotta nah mean hit me up nigga peace oh good drop felt it

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yea iite, yo let me get some more feedback on dis dawg

yo nice drop nigga

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