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Old 08-05-04, 01:55 AM   #1
klymaxxx
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droppin something from a little spar today...

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Everyone gather close so I can show ya how to rhyme
And with enough time I’ll teach ya something so sublime
Your rap sounds like a pantomime, and trust it aint a dime
I wouldn’t give ya a nickel for that weak sh*t
“if the words don’t fit than ya must acquit.”
That wouldn’t be a hit if from biggie himself it was spit
Your raps are in the pit and mine are at the peak
Your lines are weak and my flows unique
With a boatful of words, its like you sprung a leak
I am bout finished with my rap ABCs
So take your keys, and please, go seize some green trees
So next time I listen to that sh*t I am more at ease.

this is like my first stuff so hit me back with good and bad...

word,
kLyMaXXX
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