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08-17-04, 09:52 AM
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Its about time!!!!!!
IP: 7113 B39E
yo its about time to welcome the nigga thats ill
look btches and niggas this aint a fuckin drill watch me walk in here wit all the bling bling when really all i want to do is party and sing yo bitches come to me cuz i aint got on a ring bitch back it up and shake that fuckin thing bring the beat up when i'm on the floor dance floor get ready for some more when i'm in the mutha fuckin club stay away tell this to your friends nigga i dont play me and mariah carey gonna do it large betta be careful who's house you try to barge nigga (echoe's) chorus x1 yo its about time to get naughty yo its abut time to get snaughty its about time to get hectic its about time to get ignorant its about time to get in the mutha fuckin club
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08-17-04, 09:54 AM
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IP: 7113 B39E
yo theres gopnna be a remix to it wit illusion dont say this i'm gonaa take my big bros legacy yeah i'm talkin bout Ruff Tuff Thug
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08-17-04, 10:30 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Its aight a nice structure kinda basic but readin that sounds club banger style...keep it up u'll get better at ur whole style and stuff by focusing on this forum it helps when writing verses...nice
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08-17-04, 10:33 AM
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IP: 7113 B39E
thanx man i'm the ruff and tuff side of ruff tuff thug did you kno he my big bro
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08-17-04, 10:37 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
cool my lil sis rolls on RV too
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08-17-04, 10:38 AM
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IP: 7113 B39E
yeah who is she
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08-24-04, 08:19 PM
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IP: 1B6D EE58
yo view this
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08-25-04, 03:11 AM
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
alrite stuff
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08-25-04, 04:47 AM
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Klassic
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
pretty basic could have been much better.
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08-25-04, 05:14 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
i thought it was O.K you could of done a whole lot better
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08-25-04, 11:38 AM
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IP: FD9D 8A8F
taht was shit like everybody else who posted here
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08-25-04, 11:46 AM
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DA FLAMETHROWER
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it was koo i wasn't really feelin it
dfat much but i see where ur cumin from check mines out see if u like em WE RUNNIN DISS RAP SHIT QUIT BANGIN IF U AINT A GANSTA
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08-25-04, 11:49 AM
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Where is the creativity, Hon? To be totally honest, if you took out "niggas" and "bit#ches", you lose atleast 1/2 of your rhyme. Think about it. Hopefully you don't think I'm trying to diss you.. I am just trying to help you to grow and bring out the best (which is alread inside of you) that you have to offer as an artist.
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08-25-04, 06:07 PM
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IP: F8C1 F77E
yo man i wasnt feelin it niether so i agree i'll do much betta next time...
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08-25-04, 08:57 PM
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$Thug Life$
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IP: F8C1 F77E
good shit man keep droppin.
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