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may tha best nigga win

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Check in by: 09-09-04 at 03:27 PM

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HOLLOW_TIPS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:27 PM.

CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:32 PM.

yo u couldnt win againts me if u knew what i was SAYIN/u think its a fuckin GAME? well u tha only nigga PLAYIN/once tha i smell BEEF thats wen my tech's start SPRAYIN/

wen im done wit u there gonna be aksin "what hapen to that boy" like burdman and clipse/u wanna take it to war? imma start releasn clips/u that nigga workin tha corner ridin dicks/

like pitch black said "uthink u spittin GAME but tha GAME spit u out/niggas out hear know what im about/im about to put this niggas lights out/l

like a light switch/ill run this nigga down wit a fuel truck like stich/i came at u wit these rhymes in back that computer nigga prolli flintched/

niggas in tha penitentary/get scared wen they mention me/cuz if i see uhm in jail they dead/ya hurd what i said?/let tha word spread/if u see a dot thats red/watch out cuzz u could be in tha hospital bed/

this nigga keep rappin about how he pack heat/but he couldnt pack heat/if he came from hell/ill let my tech spray so it will ring a bell/u a bitch made ya chick pick u up cuzz u fell/

yo destiny is to die nigga im wild/u just a lil man slow down child/(destinys child)/dont smile nigga this aint funny/ull get DROPPED after one SHOT keep my waist HOT and ill snatch ya muney/fuckin lil dummy

u couldnt have GAME if ya NAME was GAME/u aint no stunna/ ill light u up so u hotter then summa/im hungry can u feel my hunga?/i got things to do nigga like fuckin ya bitch in my humma

ayo i been chillen in the cut gettin bored az hell waitin for this brick to come thru the mail and then im gonna sit on my ass and count my papers while i get money and u catch the vapors i got a sixth sence for detectin bitch ass niggas and then i handle their ass wit the glock 9 trigga i put hoes on blocks so they can sell ass and rocks and then i get em to my car so they can suk my cock then i look at my rolex bezel thats a portable clock and since im a smart nigga i go to wall street to look at my stock u just eat sleep and shit while i scoop up and mouth fuk ur bitch i just b chillen waitin for action ur the openin act while im the main attraction
CFA MOTHAFUKA

uppin for votes niggas come vote yall

cancel that we gone redue this battle let this one out

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

TIPS -
Yo punches were hard and they landed...
Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)...
Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once...
And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all...
/10

CFA-
Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also...
Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out...
Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall...
And your vocab was aight too...
3/10

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you took this one hollow but since you in da crew feedback...

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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

aiight battle first off cf gotta work on hi structre and flow cuz that was the hardest verse i ve had to read. no dis just line up ya lines and you'll have a better verse. hollow dct verse but in a couple lines u squeezed 3 in an it aint flow. punches werent hard but i felt the hunger in ya verse..last line was lackluster yet better than cf closer was wack ya whole verse sound like u wa talking on the phone and tips verse sound like an argument in the hood but overall that was better to read

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

hollow won dis 1
he had better punches
better personal
bettr verse all together
hollow winsa hands down

plz return tha fav battles in sig

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

Aight
HOLLOW Got This...

Stunna ya structure was everywhere, i couldnt read nuthin or find where the rhyme was, so u automatically lose (no hate just present ya rhymes better)

Hollow, ya flow............aight, ya need'a have more creativity in ya flow, but on the whole, u had the better structured, more senisble verse, so u got my vote

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

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