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Old 11-01-04, 08:22 PM   #1
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mag.nif.i.cent vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

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Topic: Life As A Drug Addict



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Old 11-01-04, 08:23 PM   #2
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..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 08:23 PM.
 
Old 11-01-04, 08:38 PM   #3
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Old 11-04-04, 01:21 AM   #4
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life as a drug addict


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My life's been wretched, ever since i messed with, drugs
its like i have no friends so acid sums up to more than hugs
crack, heroin, whatever substance i could get my fist on
getting sick, passing out in alleys, and getting pissed on
no home, no wife, no kids, my life is equal to non-existant
i stay persistant to find drugs to keep my mind twisted
so listen, to my story, see the addictiction with no glory
stay close with no hope with a bunch of drugs before me

once a rich guy, my fist rised, all the power was mine you see
unusually, i used to be a man who was confined but free
until the drugs came into sight, and my mind strayed away
no longer was i in the black and white i had swayed into gray
the drugs came freely, and the money has always been there
but a big risk to me was popping a couple pills if i dared
suddenly the change happened and i needed something better
standing on the corner for hours never minding the weather

a couple years flew by admittingly i realized i was a joke
weed wasnt doing anything for me i needed something i couldnt smoke
i moved on to crack but the change was way too weird
the adrenaline kept rushing and death was what i feared
so i sat back with a fat pack and consumed all of it
with a spoon and a lighter and the fumes crawling in
no longer could these drugs really tempt my taste buds
so i took more and more until i found some laced drugs
i swallowed a couple pills then slowly smoked a little chronic
thinking about the world not knowing it was my last day on it
i slept that night in my dreams the last word i heard was overdose
spent three weeks in a hospital unconscious and comatose
so if you payed attention closely you would see that i was addicted
but being dead at thirty one was something that i never predicted
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Old 11-04-04, 07:42 PM   #5
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My life's too horrible, Cuz of you i lost the unrestorable...
And because of you i work two jobs to buy the unfordable..
I only tried it once, but now just look at who im amongst...
Bumbs with needs of blunts n even sleep in car trunks...
Didn't graduate, cuz i wasted my time ruining my own health..
Now i have low wealth n barely makin it through life wit no help...
I did know well, after one try, dat i'll stick wit this sad addiction..
I was warned n didn't listen, now wishin that blunt i was never givin...
Always thinkin about it, after my mouths lit, i want to be around it...
I really doubt it that i'll stop since i always see it where the crowd is..

It Seems impossible to stay away, cuz this crave won't evaporate..
I just wish that it could fade, cuz it hurts my life in too many ways..

I've already got caught once n don't want to sever time again...
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Old 11-05-04, 11:07 PM   #6
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good verse I.Mind upping for votes people ........
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Old 11-15-04, 03:04 AM   #7
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battles been open 10 days and still no votes... uppin will return favor
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Old 11-21-04, 10:02 AM   #8
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yeah... i see where this "won" is going...lol... nice drop fam... i would have thought i.mind would come with a longer piece... not bad though... i'm out
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Old 11-21-04, 10:52 AM   #9
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oops.cnt vote...nice veres though peeps.
i.mind had better struc, but mayb wasnt long enough...

flow..holla at me if u wanna toical battle...wud like a rematch now ive elevated..

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Old 11-21-04, 04:29 PM   #10
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battles been open 20 days and no votes.. and tstorm ill battle you again but i was bullshitting with this verse i thought she would no show so dont take this as an indication of my topical skill getting worse but no doubt you was dope before and if you elevated it would be a close one...
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Old 11-21-04, 04:40 PM   #11
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okay this was a nice battle....both had great verses.....i really like flows structure.....iNgEnIuS mInD i liked your vocab...overall i think flow won because is seemed that he was on the story line alittle more then iNgEnIuS mInD but both had the shit verses...so my vote goes to flow....
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Old 11-23-04, 04:13 PM   #12
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iight thanx uppin.........................................
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Old 11-24-04, 03:29 PM   #13
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upping for voted drop a link ill RTF...
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Old 11-24-04, 11:01 PM   #14
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Old 11-28-04, 02:21 PM   #15
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This Battle's Been Open 27 Days Only One Vote Upping For Votes Drop A Link I'll RTF...
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