this is for the Rv Mixtape thing....... this is the first verse im writin for it (hopefully one of them will be put on) im pretty happy wit it...... but theres like one part it hink i fall off the beat.. Hope yall enjoy.. i didnt make and effects or any added to my voice, cuz i heard that they didnt want us too, so it is how i recorded it....

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Lyrics:
(some of the things im about to type i dont say right now, but im changin it to that)

The battle wages on, but im thinkin can we handle it?
Honestly, dont be scared and just abandon it
We outa be strong, as long as it straightens out
So juss stick wit wat u believe in, and leave all the hatin out
but some of us go crazy, and lately ive been hurtin
learnin its a long "road" to perfect on earth and ive been "swurvin"
in and out of the road, not told which way to go
to follow with the flow, or "fuck it" and make my own
so i sed juss "fuck it", and my luck went flyin up out the "window"
and its simple, u coulda been from "heaven", and still put thru "hell" from wat ive been through*
knowledge precedes succes, all my "success" was lost
wanted to blow out my brains, but my senses knew it had been gone
from my decisions in the past, yd i try at goin back
to her, and back to there, im tryna become a man**
but its hard, im tryna stare at my shadow in the dark
Darkness befalls us all wen it parts us from our heart
its just a part o life, she cheated but i was blamed
I broke apart, thats why im writin this shit today
I "fell", and felt like, "throwin in the towel"
Or wrap it around u.... and choke the SHit up out u
But now im comin to my senses, no more tensions and im feelin
better in the world, now that this gurl, aint in my fuckin feelings
So juss follow with the chorus, dont ignore it, react
Cuz i did, "step by step" i left, never comin back

*do u think my flow gets weird with that line???? im thinkin about takin out the "and its simple" even tho its a multi... wat ya think???

**u think i fall off the beat right here??? cuz i think i do, but im never good at figurin out wats wrong wit my shit

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