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trying to elevate my flow * high freestyle *
IP: F2A1 41C4
i've been peeping madrapper stuff in open mic and hes sick with hes flow i think and people always my flow is decent but im trying to get my flow down-packed so when i actully think N use a punch i can flow it smoth N crazy so here go a high-freestyle for ya to judge N BASE IT ONLY ON THE FLOW..
i aint go for punches or noting JUST FLOW.... PEEP.. i got a intense sense that a few men wanna opose with 4's N hoes who think they wont get smash with bo's N mo then those average killah can send N hold in da cold life toll is to un-fold a new path 2 grasp N dont step.. befor i blast ya trash u'll get smoke like hash for dat cash while thinking about my past that created this mental state-kid, with fire that look like im bake'in but im pace'ing N make'in a new style for ya to take-in base'in like addicts N get ya face in da attic while ya body get padded my attiude da baddest, pink slip lose N ya'll be the gladdest but this savage cant have-it... cuz ya heart like pin-da-taill-on-da-donkey, trust i'll take a stab-at-it take N shot at me?, hope u carry'in a automatic cuz that jewlery is like... i auto-have-it, N bullets is free..... so i feel u auto-have-it splat ya adom, re-place it with ya nut... cuz u spitting like a dick splitting this heck who persist to say hes lines are deadly.. while slitting hes wrist holloween pass.. How u expect me 2 "treat this trick" aint no peacefull-shit, cuz i'll keep fireing on ya block till ya street-is-lit 115-7 who streek is this, who beef is this u'll brake ya ankle trying to follow my foot-step... who feet is this FUCK.. why dont u greet this clip, while bullets meet-ya-lips ![]() got ya body feeling like C-low the way u done TRIP... dont ask for me to get a grip cuz that'll be ya last slip N dip.. into another HOLE like a clit.. BITCH..... honest feed back BASE IT ON FLOW ONLY.... cuz i honestly aint focus on no punches what-so-ever .... |
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IP: F2A1 41C4
upp'in dont sleep ya......
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
the flow was ill.....keep it up man......real nice
peace~1
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IP: F2A1 41C4
no dout thanks for u'r feed back...
upp'in.. i was high like a mother fucker so dont mind me..... |
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: C729 E597
I.E. u did ya thang man.the flow was sik.
V.T. upppnnn...................
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![]() ![]() I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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IP: F2A1 41C4
thanks for the feed back.....
upp'in............. |
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IP: B417 DEF0
upp'in this for more feed back.............................
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Banned
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IP: EBA1 3112
upp'in this shit.....................................
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Banned
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IP: EBA1 3112
upp'in again...................................
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New to RV
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IP: 91BE E952
This Was Good, But Please Sort Your Structure Out, I'll Edit With Proper Feedback Later.
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Banned
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IP: DADF F7AE
up up and away she blows
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The Best Never Breaks
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IP: 7402 EED9
your stucher unlike most people on this site was supburb man for real you have the nicest sturcher there is on here man i like it that is a plus so keep it up the flow is nasty to man
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7F3B 517D
oo-shit that fow was fucking ILL word danm thats hit was fire keep it up 9.5/10
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 223A AFC9
yo man that shit was dope sik as fuck flow rhymes were tight 2...
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Banned
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IP: FC89 54C5
upp'in.......
************************************************** ******************************** open mic rules: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141490 leave ya link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 u have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back if u dont understand what is a proper feed back click on these links above they should help those who really dont understand and for those who is playin dumb u'r one step to being BANND from open mic... |
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