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12-24-04, 08:55 PM
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Sam Dope
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[rate]~In Love With You~[merry christmas]
IP: 4391 3AD8
This is a rap I wrote to my gurl for Christmas...Tell me what yall think PLEASE!! I really need to know before Xmas (tomorrow) Thanx..
This not-a-lie, lately, you've been on-my-mind The truth-is, a friend like you-is, hard-to-find Helped me walk-when-blind, let me know when I crossed-a-line An angel-true, that helped me make-it-thru, the hardest-times A star-that-shined, its hard-but-I want-you-to-feel-this No gimmicks-shit, ya friendship-is, one-in-a-million Believe-it-it's-true, you a queen, I can see the genius-in-you And I wrote-this-rap, to show-you-that, I'm thinking-of-you This girls-my-queen, she means more than the world-to-me And a world, without her, just isn't the world-for-me Helped me learn-to-see, with an ass, that'll SLUR-YA-SPEECH! Told me not to get-high, because I'd get-by, with her-with-me I'm in love-with-you, this love-is-true, this queen-is-mine Forever's-a-pact, walk to heaven-and-back, to see-you-smile The love-of-my-life, the woman that I want-as-my-wife I'd leave-the-Earth to NEVER see-you-hurt, just wanna be loving-you-right Tell me what yall think! I need some feed before I give this to my gurl...Thanx and Happy Holidays yall...1 |
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12-24-04, 09:07 PM
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...Jea...
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IP: 3240 794D
werd...good drop...as always, your best category wuz the multies....i think she'll like it...yo, who is it for fam....hit me up witter name/i wont tell her dawg/who is it...
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12-24-04, 09:35 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Its for Tynisha dawg...We still strong thru 2 years...Thanx for the look dawg...I really hope she likes it...I got her some other shit too...but anywayz...uppin this bitch!! 1
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12-24-04, 10:01 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Upping for more feedback on this...
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12-24-04, 10:59 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 840E 41E4
yeah dawg good drop. shit if dat dont get shawdy idk wut will. lol.
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12-24-04, 11:51 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A34C 61B2
Post 2 links from 2 other battles that you have left good feedback in, or else this open mic will be closed..
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12-25-04, 01:57 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 28AD 5545
im feelin the drop.......... there were some spots where u didnt rhyme all that well, but the multies were really good and im sure she's gonna like it......
*goes to copy and paste for his gurl* this is kinda late, cuz ya prolly not gonna get this in time, but w/e...... its kinda short, but it prolly shouldnt be that long if its some lil thing for ur girl on christmas...... keep it up....... |
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12-25-04, 02:37 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Thanx man...Uppin for more feed on this...Btw...Heres some links...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=165955 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...098#post1844098 |
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12-25-04, 04:22 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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12-25-04, 08:28 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Uppin...much too many views and far too little feedback...Uppin...I will return the favor...Thanx...1
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12-25-04, 08:31 PM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
A'ight...this was pretty good...like FuxJustAWord said...there are some parts that dont rhyme that well...flow can be improved, so can structure...a decent drop wit some nice emotion anyway...return the favor. Peace.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167326 |
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12-25-04, 08:50 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
No doubt...Thanx for the feed...Can someone please point out the parts that didn't rhyme?? 1
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12-25-04, 09:19 PM
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.:Comin In With A Bang:.
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice song fam....Shit That could get some fine dimez...no what im sayin homeboi...
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12-25-04, 11:46 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
haha...no doubt...I gave it to my gurl today...and...well...It was a good Christmas...lol...thanx for the feed man...uppin...1
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12-26-04, 05:03 AM
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..I'm Back..
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Yo Deep Shit Hommie, I Was Feeling The FLow On This One, The Over All Concept Was Tight, Vocabulary Was There, Every Thing Was Decent...10/10..Yo Hit Me Up If You Ever Want To Collab
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