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Old 01-09-05, 08:38 PM   #1
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Post My 1st Keystyle On Here!!!

IP: 7696 4EB2

i want sum feed on dis please 4real...

high octain, ryhme pattern new style//
new shit, smooth shit dat stretch a whole mile//
blaze caps like hay stacks, rollin witta pact//
kill a nigga quicka than a runna on a track//
nothin different, keystyle got my brain trippin//
tipsy in tha club like underage hoes strippin//
all ova tha place like Ma$e in his prime//
or like "hotsause" and "tha professor" throwin dimes//
like i said dis is new shit, send my dough straight to tha bank//
up close and personal like a bullet at point blank//
send a nigga to hell if his mouth get to yappin//
strange look on my face like i've done too much rappin//
caught in a bubble like a worm in a apple//
tha newest to influence younger emcees like you//
bringin nothin but heat every time i flow//
da doors is now open, im finally here nigga, case closed//
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Old 01-09-05, 08:41 PM   #2
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i really want some feedback on dis one yall 4real.....dis might be recorded, i wanna know how yall feel...~1~
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Old 01-09-05, 08:44 PM   #3
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#1 Dont Type On Red Iss Anoyin
#2 Dont Use "/" Iss Wack
Decent Multiz
Ok Topic
Nice Metaz 7/10
Good 1st Drop....................
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Old 01-09-05, 08:49 PM   #4
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#1 Dont Type On Red Iss Anoyin
#2 Dont Use "/" Iss Wack
Decent Multiz
Ok Topic
Nice Metaz 7/10
Good 1st Drop....................


good lookin cuz but red is my shit and tha "//" is how i write...but i guess they dont look right centered huh?....matta fact, imma change dat shit now....
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Old 01-09-05, 08:54 PM   #5
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Yo Rtf In Mih Open Mic Called Last Day Of School...........
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Old 01-09-05, 09:23 PM   #6
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i got you my nig...
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Old 01-09-05, 09:28 PM   #7
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Decent drop man aint too much here but being your first onei cansee you coming up in the ranks soon so keep it up !!! 6.5/10
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Old 01-09-05, 09:32 PM   #8
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...good lookin^^^
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Old 01-10-05, 08:48 PM   #9
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can i get some more feedz....
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Old 01-10-05, 10:27 PM   #10
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ok - i was kinda feelin this - you had some decent punches also - 6/10
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