***this just a keystyle for yall, i was thinkin bout dat "soilder" (destiny child) beat and lil wayne part and i put dis together. like it or love it, i dont care***

see Supaman is a killa, got hoes all on my pillar//
you know dats 4realla//
thinkin i aint gone hit cha when im a soilder at heart//
but bein a soilder and a spitta be havin da $ torn apart//
now i cant be able to increase my status or make these beats//
if another man go and speak when i aint present in tha streets//
peep, but i keep goin and im movin, da kid aint losin//
stick to yo fuckin day job nigga, im nice and you just stupid//
and im tha truest, well probably not but yall will soon see//
dats its gone take more than some fag jokes to knock down me//
im goin too fast, nigga catchin jet lags//
im on fire but not like lloyd banks, im too cool to fumble after a nice pass//
im off tha fuckin ricktar, read da first line, im a killer//
shootin at niggas, leavin them burnt like blunt wraps nigga//
and dats da deal, you know it, dont cope a attitude//
i got tha title wit me at all times, and you just a plain dude//
dats rude...//

***i want some feedback, please***

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SO DONE WIT RV

cmon yall...whats really da deal?

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SO DONE WIT RV

yo that was ass son go do some home work go back to school get of this site mayne

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Was nothing special, work on complexing your pieces, other than that i'd give it a 5/10.

nigga fuck you...shit, im just bored and im sick of rippin wit my niggaz...so i wrote dis up...get off my dick bitch

and good lookin mage

and im lookin for mo feedbacks...get at me

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SO DONE WIT RV

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5/10 gret mind frame.........i like different

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SO DONE WIT RV

um.....i dont know what 2 say kid
you wanted me to see this shit for what.....i was wack.....let me teach you how to rap

but 4real cuz, you gotta step up a notch.....dats tha only way you'll make it on my mixtape.....come harder next time.....4/10

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Detroit PlayBoiz (DPB) 4 life nigga.....and im out

Money Fiend Ent.

kid....u only got 5 posts u act as if u know not that i don't agree wit' ya but....still

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Detroit PlayBoiz (DPB) 4 life nigga.....and im out

Money Fiend Ent.

^^^ha ha...nigga, you cant teach me shit but ay, im gone try some new shit soon....let me write up somethin....maybe we can drop some "family duo" shit OK

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SO DONE WIT RV

no biggie, but i dont think they gonna swear on destiny's child homie, lol, for real

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