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08-03-04, 02:24 PM | #1 | |||||||
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My Raps!!
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
My Game:
I got the flow Even when I’m gonna blow I got the style Through 1,000 miles A lot of people call me names But they wont be when I get the fame Ya wanna be part of the game The way ya can be part of the game is to beat me The way to beat me is to treat me The only way to treat me is to meet me! No one can beat me I’m the best there can be A lot of guys say they like the way I move But a lot of them I wouldn’t chose But then a lot of guys see me as a whore They usually say “Look at that whore at the door” Gangsta Girl: Gangsta Girl that’s my name Man I aint fuckin playin I know ya’ll want ta be like me but ya aint taken my game I am the P.I.M.P of my generation I got a lot of frustration I can rap and more But I aint gonna be your little whore Rap is my life I am gonna be a gangsta wife I want someone to support me Physically and mentally A lot of guys think I trust them enough to tell them my dreams And a lot of then wonder how I get in my jeans I got a ghetto or gangsta style People will recognize me through 1,000 miles I have others I'll post them later!! |
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08-03-04, 02:30 PM | #2 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 3158 0B2B
Hey its aight but you don't need "I got a ghetto OR gangsta style." You don't need the 'OR' in between...What is that?!
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08-03-04, 02:45 PM | #3 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
Hey!! I am new ta this!! But I got other ones that are better!! I am gonna post them later!!
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08-03-04, 07:12 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4391 3AD8
nice shit babygurl...keep droppin...you gotta work on that structure tho...aight gurl holla back at me ~1~
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08-03-04, 07:25 PM | #5 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
yeh this was nice but let me drop this right here
Look I’m into this bling thing so I see ices with devices That shines like the sun funny how they design some, a cri-sis If a thug lose his jewels like JAROO did, feel small like mice is See mean between lines and spit obscene rhymes for the public Like candidates in debates over economy but politics is the subject Got a love it being a thug legit On my status the crowd stay at us need apparatus such as Microphones and CD’S, in towns Roams as VIP’S playing jazz Be strong in flow and ski on snow like the ice capade in A nice parade during the Olympic wants the gold when I win |
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08-04-04, 12:44 AM | #6 | ||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
^^^what are ya doing..lol...sexychick try ta use larger vocab n if your new check out the tutorials if ya seriously wanna get better at this...your drop was pretty simple but it was'nt terrible just try n get better every day...
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08-04-04, 08:52 AM | #7 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 1920 7C96
nice but like it was said simple drop dont mind my stats niggaz kno im nice jus got sum fuckin hataz nah mean but n e way up ur vocab n dont go round tlkn like u can beat n e in battle cuz u will b served cuz niggaz n niggets here hate newbies tlkn big look at me yet i didnt have 2 try out 4 a crew they asked me after my first few drops...lol...n e ways good drop mami keep doin u holla back n return da favor
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08-05-04, 10:51 AM | #8 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C11A 6193
No hate but its bit basic, u got skillz tho, u just spittin straight from ya soul (always kool) but just try to get some more structure and get ya vocab going, then u gonna be dope, gurl...keep doing ya thing!
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08-05-04, 07:13 PM | #9 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
Here are some of my otha rhymes:
Life!! Talking: Ya never cared about me, all ya cared about was you and only. Ya left me hangin when i needed ya most! Well, I don't need you!! Ya never cared about me Ya just let me be I need a man who is there for me and who cares for me Well that's not you at all You just like to go out partying and havin a ball Ya called me names like a hoe and a whore If ya thought that then why did ya date me for? I aint gonna cry over you I wanted to commit sucide, I bet ya had no clue I know you, you didn't give a fuck Ya probably dated a girl for a buck You were always on my mind I always questioned if ya were cheatin and why Ya said that ya wanted to marry me and ya wanted me to have your kids I think ya changed ya mind because of my fits There all lies Now is my chance to say good-bye!! Sexy Chick: Guys like my sexy style Mostly when I'm gettin wild I should be in a magizine Becuase I am the ghetto queen I like to shake my thing round and round Guys like it when I put it down I got the pretty ice and cash Also I got the pretty ass I got the sexy hips And the sexy lips I'm tired of guys usin lines on this sexy Chick I wanna do more than see a flick Most people just see me as a hottie Wit a body! So tell me what ya'll think!! |
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08-05-04, 08:19 PM | #10 | ||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
there all basic really you need ta try n get more complex...go check the tutorials they'll help you alot...
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08-05-04, 10:58 PM | #11 | ||||
Simply Dope
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IP: 28AD 5545
^^tru... thats all i can say
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08-06-04, 12:35 AM | #12 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: D8DE 5C54
like: i "ate" a "rat"
this is no "debate" cause i pack a "gat"
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08-06-04, 04:41 PM | #13 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Ma, you seem to be stuck on the self-glorification tip, but other than that your shit was straight. You gotta work on your structure too, but you'll get better with practice. I understand you're new to this, so just keep at it. Check out some of my posts and let me know what you think.
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08-07-04, 12:10 AM | #14 | |||||
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IP: A621 A1C1
that was pretty decent just use more complex vocab.nice spit tho.
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08-07-04, 12:25 AM | #15 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
All I can say is nice drop and keep on going towards being all you can be,,,
Gob bless all,, Oh yea one more thing,,I told yall I had something for them haters and here it is. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140326
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