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Check in by: 08-09-05 at 11:29 PM

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Young Montana has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 11:04 PM.

Reflekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 11:13 PM.

Re-flekt, cmon nigga, u wanna beef? then u'll meet-tecs
if you dont wanna get ya T (t shirt) wet, then u betta show me sum re-spect
beatin this bitch ass nigga will be my proposition
act slick, then ur right cheek will be my glocks position
im equipped wit the beam, play hard then its clips u receive
u betta have a fuckin vest on, actin like your christopher reeve
the tone'll melt ya chin, soon as the heat meets ya cheek
and itll have ya face hanging over ya neck like a jesus piece

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

i'll battle this faggot..but let me tell you that you'll never be respected
cause the only way you'll be a 10 is if you multiplied your record*
if we were golfing its possible that they'd say you might be good
the way your skillz stay under par like you was tiger woods
all of my punches will hit you good..even if i miss your left and hit your right eye
tried to be cool with you for a second but now "theres no more mister nice guy"**
my lyrics are like firearms..thats why they say i'll put the teks(text) on you
the only reason you'd be any good is the simple fact that my skillz reflekt on you


a quick key..goodluck

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o damn i forgot to put in my explanations..damn it..o well..

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good shit, ......................good luck too........................

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Voted For: Reflekt

hmmmm... pretty one sided 2 me !

Flow - i gotta give this a TIE...both of yalls flow was clickin...and both of yall fell off alil bit at certain points so no1 had an advantage on the flow...on the other hand....

Punches - definately Reflekt...even tho he used a PLAYED OUT "under par" punch he still took this catagory...his last bar was creative and still came hard...first bar was pretty decent 2...montana sounded exactly like tony montana wud sound...tryin to b 2 gangsta wit it jus sayin different ways to blast but none of them were really PUNCHES to attack reflekt !...and stop usin the same words twice...CHEAKS CHEAKS CHEAKS...got real corny...work on that...

Metaphors - you both had only 1 good meta so imma TIE this catagory...montana's last bar and reflekt's last bar...need more !!!!!....

Wordplay - gotta give it 2 Reflekt...i was feelin the last bar how he used his name 2 throw in a decent punch !...montana it jus seemed like u was tryin to put dashes in between words 2 make it more complex then it really was !...if its creative n complex we'll realize it if its ill like that !....

Multis - NONE...nuff said...yall gotta incorporate them into ur rhymes so the flow is hot... feel me

Originality - gotta say Reflekt...montana u sounded like a typical thug ass nigga that jus threats to blast on dudes feel me...u gotta b different from that...das coo n all but cant JUST BE a gangsta...u gotta be a lyricist 2 feel me !...even tho reflekt had that played out 2nd bar, his 1st and last barz take the cake in this battle because montana didnt have anything 2 compare to them ! (jesus piece bar was str8 but i was feelin the reflekt bar alil more...good shyt tho...gotta have more metas like that tho !!! feel me)

Vote - Reflekt

yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig iight...good look

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good shit, uppin............................................. ........

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

cool uppin this battle. lets get it closed quick..

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Voted For: Reflekt

i'll battle this faggot..but let me tell you that you'll never be respected
cause the only way you'll be a 10 is if you multiplied your record*
^^ok.....5/10
if we were golfing its possible that they'd say you might be good
the way your skillz stay under par like you was tiger woods
^^kinda played.....3/10
all of my punches will hit you good..even if i miss your left and hit your right eye
tried to be cool with you for a second but now "theres no more mister nice guy"**
^^wat's with the **?...2/10
my lyrics are like firearms..thats why they say i'll put the teks(text) on you
the only reason you'd be any good is the simple fact that my skillz reflekt on you
^^techs/text lines played and no punch...2/10

OK...a mediocre verse.Flow was ight.That 1st bar rhymed a little iffy.As for your punches..well they were ight.1st bar was probably your best one.2nd bar with the golfing/up par was played.3rd was weak.4th...tech/text is played and there was no punch because you self glorifing.So just up your creativity up and shit.And don't put that "quick key" anymore.That's just an excuse people make when they drop a weak verse.Either come strong...or don't come.SO next time..do'n't put "quick key"

Re-flekt, cmon nigga, u wanna beef? then u'll meet-tecs
if you dont wanna get ya T (t shirt) wet, then u betta show me sum re-spect
^^This was self glorifing..no punch..1/10
beatin this bitch ass nigga will be my proposition
act slick, then ur right cheek will be my glocks position
^^again...where's the punch?...0/10
im equipped wit the beam, play hard then its clips u receive
u betta have a fuckin vest on, actin like your christopher reeve
^^reeve lines are played...1/10
the tone'll melt ya chin, soon as the heat meets ya cheek
and itll have ya face hanging over ya neck like a jesus piece
^^no punch....2/10

OK...wat's up with the self glorifing and the killing lines.Diss homie.Don't fuckin use that shit.It's ok to use it as a set-up or filler or something...but not as a punch.Punch is for dissing and that only.Only punch you had was that reeves one...and reeve lines are played.

Vote-Reflekt
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Voted For: Reflekt

STRUCTURE-BOTH had choppy structure....ya'll needa make each line end at the same place gives it better flow.both up on that

Vocab-Niether had good vocab biggest word was propostion, so i obviously wont count this catergory...didnt see much...again both up on vocab fo real as ur verse goes along enhance the vocab to make it more enjoyable to read...

Personals-Reflekt, you had a couple good personals that caught my eye Young montanna had a played line that ive seen like 4 times today about christopher reeve.....so thats played...didnt hit hard....up on that yo

Pucnhes-Reflekt......had good punches dissed him hard.....young montanna had ok punches but didnt hit as hard as reflekt.....when you throw a punch make sure ur actually throwing it at your opponent....up on that

Multis-Both really had little multis if that.....cant say much in this catergorie niether.....both need to up on multis so u can enhance ur flow/verse

Originality-Reflekt had a more fresh verse that stood out more with creativity and good hard punches nice job...u earned the win!.....

v/REFLEKT

RTF ON MY battle or this vote will be removed

uppin this battle for some votes. come on man. lets close this battle.

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uppin this battle for some more votes. come on man. lets close this battle.

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