I started rapping after I heard Nig L and heres my first written

Lyrically theirs not many who could test my floetry cuase ~
When I be rappin people be snappin like their in poetry clubs ~
I don't take much seriously, so when I remarks take it how you wanna ~
But you analyze, I'll leave your decomposing anatomy bakin' in a sauna ~
I'm well recognized on the mic, you don't have a chance don't rap ~
My bars are beyong basic,when their written it proves I use advanced vocab ~
Only a few niggas understood the complexcity in my scripts when i was unheard ~
that made mc's suffocate the color purple, like a smurf with a sunburn ~
And those wack liers ~ who attempted to make my plans diminish and back fire ~
will cause my punchlines to hit thiers lungs, and leave them aired out like flat tires~

hmmmmmmmm i dont see many havin that much wordplay in their first written but thats good for u, lol...... mines was prolly like

I get all the hoes..... just so u know
i told a girl she sucked... she was like "i also blow"
Oh no, these bitches are gettin real stupid
i tell hoes i dont love em, like snoop did
Oooh shit, yall are foolish, but i rule them charts
fuck ya girl in the mornin, and than shoot some darts

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

my old OM "Blah Blah"...that was my first lol...

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Thats eriously my first, I tried to jack Big L's entire style no lie

^mine was prolly alot like fux's, cept it wuz just a bit better, lol^

lol, my 1st shit wuz frum ova 3 years ago wen i wuz 13, check it...

yo me n my homie went 2 tha sto
n i wuz checkin out all of tha hoes
then i turned 2 my right, and wut did i c?
a stupid muthaphukka who wuz lookin at me
so me n my homie, we kicked hiz ass
then we went out back n started sellin grass
tha stupid muthaphukka wuz very sad
he sed "sellin weed iz really bad"
i sed "yeah i do sappose"
then i swung my fist n i broke hiz nose
then i swung my bat wif all of my might
hit him in tha leg, yeah i wanted 2 fight
he just layed there wif hiz broken leg
he sed "u stupid muthaphukkin fag"
so i swung my bat again n i hit him in tha face
then he reached in hiz pocket, and pulld out sum mace
so i turned around n i ran away
n sed "u aint gittin me wif that pepper spray"
then i got in tha car n drove ova hiz legs
hiz frends came 2 help him, but they were all fags
so me n my homie both shot em up good
then me n my homie drove back 2 tha hood

lmao, shits frum early 2002, i went 2 skool tha day after i wrote it n wuz rappin it 2 everybody n they wuz all like "holy shit u good at rappin" LMAO, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

you started off to at an early age

Me in november 2003

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the first piece of dopeness i ever put up................



WERD!!!!

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^^^^ dopeness....... but mines the best..... shit, see that wordplay on suck and blow...... ooo wee, cant defeat that man

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Undastand my emotion is so focused neva has one been so hot and yet the coldes//t
cop the metaphores that i send to u and any of them bitch affilates that u run with//
probly secretly dien ya hair and exchange ya jeans and shorts for skirts//
talk to ya pastor and convert to muslim and hopefully you wont get murked//
cop the techniques kid im pre-warnin you im good//
elax lips ah have u catchin em in the back like ricky off boyz in the hood//
ya cd's ah neva reach up out the plastic//
done battlein ni99az claimen they hard but they ass hole stretched out like elastic//
get ya crew to beg and plead-wont matter you bound 2 end up numb like chris reeves/


My 1st Battle..........Wow this was garbage

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My first battle on RV was against you ^^^^^^^^ lol

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i would put my first shit down, but idk how long ago that was and i know damn well i can't find it. it would be from when i was like 14 or somethin

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OM's

Rofl. Lemme go search for this shit. I'll have it in a second.