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Old 05-15-05, 09:13 PM   #1
Tremendous
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Post the First flow you wrote

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I started rapping after I heard Nig L and heres my first written

Lyrically theirs not many who could test my floetry cuase ~
When I be rappin people be snappin like their in poetry clubs ~
I don't take much seriously, so when I remarks take it how you wanna ~
But you analyze, I'll leave your decomposing anatomy bakin' in a sauna ~
I'm well recognized on the mic, you don't have a chance don't rap ~
My bars are beyong basic,when their written it proves I use advanced vocab ~
Only a few niggas understood the complexcity in my scripts when i was unheard ~
that made mc's suffocate the color purple, like a smurf with a sunburn ~
And those wack liers ~ who attempted to make my plans diminish and back fire ~
will cause my punchlines to hit thiers lungs, and leave them aired out like flat tires~
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