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05-15-05, 09:39 AM
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This is my first post!
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freestyle : the beginning
IP: 4FDB 7FF2
yo,
im the best in the site, matter of fact in the world why u talking about jockeys, and u got a dyke for a girl? imma keep chopp'in bricks, till i fill the block with perals 40 cal by the stomach, only way i take shot till i ERRL bang bang??, u thought this was a porn film change change??, from the weed game to crill's blame blame, friends and fam, weed and phills lame lames, who pop-shit but hold steel, face get ate like whole meals so when i blast ya best to believe ya flesh i'll look like oat-meal bitch freez and hold still, while u bearly breath shaken like cold chills im making an old deal, with a new friend who need a new touch but when i flow each bar is like i need a new dutch yo hold up let me roll something got my mind right.... . . . ok LETS GO!! I get my mind right while shoting with my left is all i know the lyrical doogie............................................ ............ cuz i got more verse then houser got journal entery after each one of hes show slap my nuts on faces  from each one of hes hoes  walk by dolo throu a gang-fight.... and hang-man with flags on poles  i'll toe-tag ya parents, after they was found crush by a truck on the main rode.... yo fuck that its ova kid ayo, Peep what u said clown, ya beef is getting minced now Cuz I should join the PBA, everytime I strike I knock Ten down Ur short of the measure's fill, win? U can hope but u never will So I suggest u coin my phrases then use em to buy some better skills" ITS A WRAP!!! fuck outta here and im just getting started.... this aint even really all i can do this aint shit compare to what i can do or will do just be ready mother fuckers the time is here 2005 the take-ova has begone.....
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!! 
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05-15-05, 09:45 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 4FDB 7FF2
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!!
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05-15-05, 03:40 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
LoL HA man that was nice cuz liked the way u wrecked it! nice freestyle! my opinion of this thread is that that flow was sik cuz keep that up man! n holla atcha boy
freestyle overall>>8/10
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"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
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05-15-05, 04:04 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 4FDB 7FF2
thanks for u'r feed back fam....
upp'in for more....
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!!
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05-16-05, 11:12 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 9612 1AE3
upp'in this joint.....................
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!!
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05-20-05, 06:25 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: CCE7 12CD
upp'in...............................
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!!
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05-20-05, 08:23 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: D5AB 74BE
this was decent
some seriously stretched lines that throw ya off the read but overall, just work on your structure...decent con
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-20-05, 09:01 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: CCE7 12CD
thanks fam it was something i just did quick to see how ya would take it befor i focus more i wanna see if people around here like raw freestyles or quick ones or pre-written verse that i really focus on and came hard??
so yea thanks for ya feed back fam..
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!!
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