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No Hate
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First to 3 is a K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-27-05 at 02:47 PM

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Fumin has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 02:17 PM.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 02:27 PM.

I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane.
If you don't get the punches/wordplay then don't vote .

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You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth

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Voted For: 9th Degree

word boys.

>I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
decent opener yo, 6/10
>Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
not okay? lol...kinda worded bad, punch isn' that hard 4/10
>I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
decent attempt at wordplay, not that effective 5/10
>When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane.
word, seen this concept too many times, and actually i think 9th used this punch recently too, lol 5/10

overall: 20/40...not bad man, seems like you wrote it quick, most of your concepts have been done, so i suggest come up with some creative shit....ya know.....word, not bad though, still a decent battle, just nothing too special.....keep up.

>You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
lol! wow, funny opener, good play off name 8/10
>Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
cool...good avy play 7/10
>But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
>Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
meh, not bad, concept has been done, but another decent name play 6/10
>I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth
hahaha, great closer...to a solid verse, haha 8/10

overall: 29/40 word, this was definately one sided, 9th, you came out with some good stuff man, definately funny stuff man, haha, laughed at every line i think....no much to suggest to work on, you're pretty much set man, you know whats good.....good show man, keep up

v/9th degree, no hate

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Voted For: 9th Degree

Pretty ok battle.

Fumin,

You dont have to bold you words. Im sure people here know what you're talking about. If not then it wouldnt matter anyway. You had some decent punches. Some were played as hell (ex: I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin)

You should start off your battle with some original shit,a whack starter loses interest of the person reading it (like myself)

9th Degree,

This wasnt even close to your best verse, and im sure you know that. But overall it was ok. You had some pretty whack punches also (exBut maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card)

Your starter wasnt all that great,but it was felt a little.
So overall 9th took this shit.

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Voted For: 9th Degree

ight good battle imma break it down....


9th:

You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
^^ lol nice nameplay good opener 7/10
Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
^^ lol good punch 7/10
But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
^^ played booo!! 5/10
I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth
^^ not very good from you.. 5/10

24/50

below average i spose u did what u needed to do and that was it so i aint gonna fret bout it... u shud just stay consistant from now on.. i enjoyed the first part and the rest was boo!!

fumin:

I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
^^ not really feelin this 6/10
Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
^^ lol ok but not hard hitting 5/10
I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
^^ nive wordplay 6/10
When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane
^^ ok nbot really hard hitting 5/10



22/50

your verse was good but i felt tht u didn't come as hard as u usualy do if u had a couple more punches in thereor u stayed consistant then u wouldav got this but you didnt and that was our flaw..

close battle though

v/ 9th for havig harder punches better flow and structure

rtf on any battle in my sig plzz pz

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blah.............. fumin only had wordplay and shit................

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Voted For: Fumin

I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
^^ not worded as a punch... if u said his disses hacked into ya desk top and couldn't get under your skin... it'd be a diss 5/10
Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
good wordplay but selfglorifying 5/10
I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
^^good wordplay but s/g agian, aslo i think i seen a line very similar to that before 5/10
When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane.
^^5/10.. s/g... sayin what your ganna do isn't a punch, good wordplay, but not a punch, u gotta make fun of him not just say clever things

9th..

You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
denect, name play personal, and a diss, not s/g
Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
^^ dont get the punch but its not s/g so thats still good
But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
^^ s/g, and i dont like using letter plays of names... not feelin
I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth
^^decent, not a very direct punch, but still a diss and not s/g

vote 9th- for not havin as many s/g lines and a couple of decent bars with personals wordplay punches.
fumin- try dissin your opponet more and not just sayin witty shit. good wordplay and shit, but get more direct with your punches


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^^^
that vote was for 9th, my bad, change it.....

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^^^^^^^^^ u voted wrong homie......

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