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Old 08-29-05, 07:47 PM   #1
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Torch Ft Tim McGraw-Something Like That

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Tim McGraw

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Well I Was 15 Years Old, When I First Saw Her And
She Had Her Hair Tied, And A Jump Rope In Her Hand
I Was Talking A Big Game, With The Fellas Out Back
Told Em' I'm Going To Be With Her, He Said I Doubt That
The Very Next Day, I Brought Her A Gift And A Rose
And She Had A Shine On Me, From Head To Toes
She Was Looking At Me, When I Saw Her Face
So She Came Over Gave Me The Number To Call Her Place


Talk To Em Tim

Tim McGraw
I had a barbeque stain on my white t-shirt
She was killing me in that miniskirt
Skippin' rocks on the river by the railroad tracks
She had a suntan line and red lipstick
I worked so hard for that first kiss
And a heart don't forget something like that



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Two Years Later I Was Heading Out Of Town
When I Saw Her Face In A Car A Few Rows Down
So I Pulled Over On The Side And Sure Enough
It Was Her, And She Was Driving Her Fathers Truck
I Waved Passed The Old Truck Glass And What?
She Pulled Over Quick Spilling Her Drink In Her Cup



Tim McGraw
I had a barbeque stain on my white t-shirt
She was killing me in that miniskirt
Skippin' rocks on the river by the railroad tracks
She had a suntan line and red lipstick
I worked so hard for that first kiss
And a heart don't forget something like that

Like an old photograph
Time can make a feeling fade
But the memory of a first love
Never fades away

I had a barbecue stain on my white t-shirt
She was killing me in that miniskirt
Skippin rocks on the river by the railroad tracks
She had a sun tan line and red lipstick
I worked so hard for that first kiss
A heart don't forget, no a heart don't forget
I said a heart don't forget something like that
Oh, not something like that


Oh Yea We Have Almost The Same Concepts.


Picture That...

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Old 08-29-05, 08:03 PM   #2
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lol this is more funnier than dope dawg....speechless lol



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Old 08-29-05, 08:04 PM   #3
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liked this, felt it was a good solid drop...ur vocab was plain and simple but still filled ur verse with good imagery....ur verse was more hip hop and his was country could tell the difference....but went good with it......just like nelly ......good structure.....excellent flow...overall 7.5/10
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Old 08-29-05, 08:07 PM   #4
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Thank You MK....
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Old 08-29-05, 10:45 PM   #5
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Oh HaHa Thank You NiggaPlease
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Old 08-29-05, 11:02 PM   #6
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hahaha..man the whole time i pictured tim with stains on a tall tee
but was straight man..solid flow, stayed on the concept
give it 7.3
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Old 08-29-05, 11:04 PM   #7
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Thank You Thank You. Your Far To Kind
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Old 08-30-05, 11:52 PM   #8
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ha ha. O man this was cool. It was kinda gay though cause it reminded me of the Nelly song with hiim. overall you had a good concept imagery coulda been upped but it was cool.
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Old 08-30-05, 11:57 PM   #9
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Thank You Very Much Bastard.
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