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Old 10-17-05, 02:36 AM   #1
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"Don't Judge Me"....Speats Mixtape Track...

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Old 10-17-05, 07:35 AM   #2
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nice intro man, realistic, dope flow, nice two voices man, like this track seriously, this is on the mixtape easylie man, chorus is cool too nice song seriously, didnt wait to get something good like this, keep droping
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Old 10-17-05, 08:40 AM   #3
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i wanted to use this beat fior your mixtape speats....

intro is nice....

flow is ite.. lyrics are pretty good your hiss is way to loud.. production aint that good could be better..

sorry it aint good feed im in a rush

overall decent track keep droppin em jus work on your production of tracks..
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Old 10-17-05, 07:35 PM   #4
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Old 10-17-05, 08:08 PM   #5
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chea mayne nice intro i liked it! and was feeling the beat this def' belongs on a mixtape!no doubt,the flow was nice the scheeme was good what moe do u need nice drop ~1~
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Old 10-17-05, 09:10 PM   #6
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Old 10-17-05, 09:16 PM   #7
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Old 10-19-05, 03:28 PM   #8
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Old 10-19-05, 03:42 PM   #9
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ur style/mojo reminds me of my man Mr. Pickles...kinda dark...serious...spiritual almost


or maybe I'm seeing wrong


beat build up nicely


that beat is hot ...but wut wudda set it off propa would be some kinda TRILL on the keyboard as part of the melody...Liek TWEE LEEL EL<LELELELELELELE


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flow is good


good lyrics


kinda bangin...


7.3/10



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Old 10-20-05, 09:35 PM   #10
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Old 10-20-05, 10:43 PM   #11
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intro - good talking. good point

beat starting isnt this a real song? sounds like something i heard before.

verse 1 - flow real basic. still cool though. good job on mentioning God good lyrics. emotion is pretty good. your mic is kinda good but i can hear some pops

chorus - good message. real basic though

verse 2 - ooh @ the stand tall line. wow the little kids line was wack. flow is the same as the first verse. try to switch it up a little so it sounds more interesting.


overal this was a pretty decent track. beat was cool but was missing something. it was still good. flow was on point but got boring cause you kept it the same throughout. lyrically this was good though. good job to both of you.

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