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Old 05-22-06, 01:27 PM   #1
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Old 05-22-06, 01:52 PM   #2
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aigght your vox all sound monotone flows on point...delivery is jus borin in this track....i would like this track but i think you need to respit it....lyrics is cool i like yo topic on this...gud drop yo
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Old 05-22-06, 08:37 PM   #3
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Lyrics are good and the rhyming is nice

Flow is on point, but could stand for some change ups

Delivery is monotone, even though you were attempting to be melodic...switch the key/pitch every once in a while


solid drop bro





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Old 05-23-06, 09:20 PM   #4
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thx man..........
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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