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Old 08-30-04, 09:16 PM   #1
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Exclamation "it's a shame"

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it'z a shame
young kidz trynna get sum brain

trynna show dey got game
from sum young slut dame

"it'z a shame"

a young ass hoe
where she bin, she don't even kno

juss a dirty disease bag
bang'in da wrong fag

until he pull out his mag
den she realize he aint juss dere to "shag"

she just a "rag"

used by many
by sum kid who had too many glasses a heni

i bet his folks'd pay a penny*
to see dey son alive one last tyme
befo dey found him on da ground, dead
from dat dirty hoe's disease,
cold, 'n sweaty*

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Old 08-30-04, 09:17 PM   #2
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wtf need elevation...
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Old 08-30-04, 09:23 PM   #3
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i dunno.....juss don't lyke 'em hoes

i kno....needz wrk
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Old 08-30-04, 09:23 PM   #4
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yeah jus to let u kno i wasnt hatin i aint a hater...
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Old 08-30-04, 09:31 PM   #5
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nice drop...........most newbes dont even dont even spit shit dat tite...............cool shit
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Old 08-30-04, 11:19 PM   #6
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ok the actual lyrics were good and so was the flow but way off on the style you gotta make you lines longer i no you won't get anyway with what you doing now but keep working at it.
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