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09-28-05, 06:08 PM
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We Dont Care U Leave feed i'll RTF
IP: 23DF D68F
yeah lets see here
www.soundclick.com/jayjking "We Dont Care" yeahhhhh lol its nice i'm likin it will edit with links LINKS ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209899 ----------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209947
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09-28-05, 06:32 PM
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IP: D792 1390
i'm feeling the beat... your chorus could use some work, try not to stress your last word so hard, it sound forced. Your flow sounds better from what I heard from you before. Ya lyrics are aight. It's a relaxed track, nice to hear those every now and then. Not bad. RTF... hit the link in my sig.
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09-28-05, 06:55 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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alright i got u tahnks for the feed
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09-28-05, 07:08 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
I like the beat you use, nice n smooth my type of beat. I personally like your voice not to high not to low, the hook you did was pretty good. the volume on your vocals were on a perfect level. your flow is pretty good i'd say, emotion is pretty good too, nice dubs too gives it some nice sound and creativity, gives your track a real nice sound ya know. overall i think this song was good, i like your style and shit. keep up man
can you rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869 1 luv
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09-28-05, 07:23 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 23DF D68F
alright i got you thanks for the feed
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09-28-05, 08:53 PM
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IP: 62B3 9910
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beat is dope lol, your voice dosint fit with the beat, no hate, dope chorus seriously i love it, nice effect, who made the beat? nice verse, nice flow and nice presence in the song, it sounds like u had fun doin it, mmm i dunno maybe the best ive heard from u seriously .::.Speats.::. |
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09-28-05, 09:04 PM
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IP: 23DF D68F
thanks for the feed...really preciate it
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09-29-05, 05:45 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 8788 37DF
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this is a smooth beat...i like it...chorus is nice just that you seemed to fall of the flow cos of ur breathe..as for ur verse its all kinna 'ahhh...ahhh at the end of some words wasnt really really diggin that but u flowed pretty nice...gd looking word up..
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10-03-05, 10:10 PM
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IP: 23DF D68F
upppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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10-10-05, 01:37 AM
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IP: 12E7 3621
uppin once again
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10-10-05, 08:34 AM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
Beat: decent...kinda old schoolish
Flow: it's on beat...nothing major either way Rhyming: decent at best...nothing too intricate Delivery: I like your dubbing...voice a bit raspy/monotonous Overall: not a bad track...not great... 6.5/10 |
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