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worst ever | 2 | 28.57% | |
hell no | 1 | 14.29% | |
it sucked pretty bad | 3 | 42.86% | |
it was mediocre | 0 | 0% | |
pshh..... | 0 | 0% | |
donno, didnt even bother readin it | 0 | 0% | |
good | 0 | 0% | |
really good | 0 | 0% | |
best ever | 0 | 0% | |
YOU ARE GODS!!! | 1 | 14.29% | |
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02-12-04, 06:41 PM | #1 | ||||||
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first real piece take a look
IP: 658A 08CB
yo i'm the cripple in red
or the blood red crip ya, you heard what i said, dont make me bust you in the lip: this here's the federal ferret yo, he walks the walk in that he has merit but hell never talk. man, together well make you balk cause we sick like that the ferret, he likes to stalk man, me, i just rock, dont say nothin dissin or you i will sock man, you just pissin ill take you to the dock cu, youll sink like a rock your body the ferret will fill with weights so it dont float back to the top man stop that cryin heres a mop: 'snot like your dyin, fuck, them tears youd better sop, ~F2 *THIS RAP WAS WRITTEN BY FEDERAL FERRET AND INTENDED TO BE RAPPED BY THE BLOODY RED CRIP.
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02-12-04, 08:41 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 9CA0 C805
and this was a poem? this isn't worth the criticism...
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02-12-04, 09:46 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: BD29 86A4
umm is all i have to say
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02-12-04, 10:10 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 57F4 FA88
agrees with ripedfire.
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02-16-04, 10:11 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 8C97 3A3C
maybe poems isnt youre thing man
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02-17-04, 02:11 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 2BFD 44EF
that was pretty bad dog-- i can see your idea, its just a fucked up one
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02-17-04, 07:07 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
well hummm see it...... well hum... didnt make no kinda sense
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02-17-04, 08:16 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 3DEF 9A9C
all hail rapid fire haha
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03-16-04, 11:13 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 25BF 927D
your a bit whack - post it in a rap forum not poetic scriptures - from an old member with new id
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03-24-04, 03:20 AM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 0ABC 464B
i didnt know what you were talking about
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03-24-04, 03:05 PM | #11 | ||||
yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Wasn't a poem...
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04-10-04, 01:45 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: F25E 8803
It was quite "unique" and "eccentric" whatever it was.....LOL...you fell off your bike on this one, dust yourself off and give it another go....
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04-11-04, 02:22 PM | #13 | |||||
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IP: 0FEA 5664
your a newb..so I can't say anything bout it..well i was never as bad as u..but this isn't a poem...just keep tryin..and change your name..cuz first impressions always count..
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