Lately the topic been the same as my mind state
confused and abused simply tempted and irate
Swiftly with swords, cut cords and start war
challenge whole cities, create new lands for explore
for warn the first born of torn scorn and perplexity
instantanious as Hex's be, bent back like the letter "C"

First an foremost we'll sit back and just chill
here's where I explain the strategies we'll make real
Tempted like demon spawn, laid out on the table
create templates of fable, unstable yet true
combine lyrics and vocab make wars outcome anew
to begin with simplicity means my minds all askew

Once we begin, we'll set in right...here
and once you're all in, settled in, set for years
for the stronghold is weak if you know what to seek
circle the town's whole begin at the streets
Start at the backdrops, the farm stops, the cash crops
cut off supply, straight deny all their town shops

As soon as they see you're settled in and prepared
they'll all start to pilledge and act like they're scared
dont begin to presume you're aware of whats their
they'll consume and confuse you, unleash undenied warfare
counter this attack with swift beats and sly wordplay
snap all the there hopes, contenue for eight days
at the end of this onslaught put end to there ways
go for the leader, attack like a cascade
swade battle from one district, move on to another
goto the core, rape, pilledge and plunder

now at the new spot, they crew stops and see's
all of this info their tactician forsee's
at the end of this countdown, search high heaven and sea's
for any people that may have escaped in the tree's
now for the hunt that proclaims that you've won
dont stop the carnage till day break's and dawn comes
the sun will peak and you'll remain to display
warfare unending, contending what may..
be it tomarrow or days down the road
you'll know you fought well when whole cities emplode
destruction by your hands, your ways..
displays what war gave unending to humanity's days

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Blow It - Topical

nice drop dawg
It's flowed really well,
Had very nice vocab
Structure was good
NIce emotion,
nice drop keep it up,

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peace

um ... i read a lil then passed out sorry ! ..... just woke back up and wanted to let you know that it's nice g peace !

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great peice
great vocab
excellent flow
good emotion
keep droppin its hot

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Hit up some more feedback

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Blow It - Topical

hey yo that was some hot shit great structre great vocab great shit allover.......


one love..........

Hit up some more feedback, anything I could do better as far as topicals? Appreciated.

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Blow It - Topical

id like 2 c u drop more om ur hot
keep droppin

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as for the piece, very nice, flows well, werd-play was nice n creative, it didnt lack much except for origionality, war is an obvious topic for anyone but for ure comment about topics, i'd say try n look into makin flows about topics not many or no-1 has done befor, well u could say that for every topic dropper but there ya go.......

holla........

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