once tha glock cocks(cocking sound)
you'll all get shot
just like tupac
when he fucked around
in the wrong block(gunshot)
most niggas give me an attitude
but what i want now
is some mutha fuckin grattitude
there isnt no move
that i cant smack at you
call me pussy
that'll cause me to mad at you
give me the finga
nigga you wont linga
im trying to be a singa
call me a wanna be
nothing is what you gonna see
the size of my fist
ya shouldnt ignore
if you get me pist
i'll kick your ass just like did to some1 before
man my shotgun shell
is gonna send yo ass to hell.
so you betta repel
you gonna go down
if you come to my town
and start fuckin around
im not a hater
ima eliminater
i gotta keep it real
so ya'll know how i feel

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ayt first off how u gonna write sumtin dissin tupac nigga is a legend r.i.p. nigga sure was more thug than u ever will dream of bein n on top of dat its 2 short n was crappy as fuck nigga here's sum real advise......dont quit ur day job...shit my lil brotha coulda wrote dis shit fuckin whack ass wanna be mc but hatin though jus barin facts keep practicin do ya think jus dont tlk shit bout those u'll neva amount 2 peace out holla 1 luv check me out

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look nigga its only a fact that nigga tupac got his ass whacked for being a stupid ass.and who the said that want be like him.and i wasnt even done with the song.bitch check it out later.i dont wwana hear from u eva again bitch.and i admire tupac and its only the first diss i eva made against him including the one i just made.

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look ya'll this is just an apitizer.dont hate.

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lol my bad playboy nice drop finally finished i see i hear ya though no beef remember relax its jus music oh by da way i admire him 2 him biggie n eminem all feed me my flow n desire 2 b who i wanna b peace nigga holla back dogg 1 luv

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same here. i'll try to keep it cool. yo do you know where i can make beats.

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when keepin it real goes wrong..

No offence, that sucked. Terribly. Only thing that was good was the wordplay and vocab.

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ok i'll improve. thanx.

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ummm.....syllable count was off in my opinion and not enough
words in each line but when you do have enough words in each
line it happens to screw it up a lil

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retire ur rapping nothings happening for u on this site u suck just get it right lol holla