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07-24-04, 01:33 AM
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shadow and fluidmoon (true love )
IP: AAF4 20CB
hook :fluid moon My days have been nothing but blessings since i've met you, and every night i go to sleep i'm seeing you, Ever since our eyes locked, i knew this was true, verse 1 shadow my love for you is makin me go wild .... my love carrys on for miles and miles... i need ya girl..you know u just my style... i love ya now and promise 2 for a while'... u need me i need you girl thats fa'sho..... if you ever left my emotions would turn cold... all my love and hate for you would explode.. were ment to be together and we both know...... ur love is addicting belive i need you.... cant go a single day without seein you... ur my lifegirl..what am i suposed to do..? not afraid to admit my love for u is true.... got u in tha back seat of tha car on tha leather.... i remember school days..and writin u love letters.. baby girl..i need ya now and will love ya forever... i promise baby girl..we ment to b together...... hook x2 vrs numba 2: fluid moon You are my life, my breath, my every whisper, take me, i'm yours, my body i've surrendered, you've shown me how to love again feel the weight off my shoulders lifted, we'll roam this world hand in hand, knowing that we're gifted, i'mso high cuz you'rewonderful, you make me feel like a true woman strong and beautiful, ur my man and the reason i wrote this song, Together we can do anything with the love fate handed us so strong, hook x2 vrs 3 shadow i love the way u shake that sexy body... i love u girl im ya cutie..ur my hotty..... love at first site..ur beauty just got me'..... im ya "ja-rule" and baby girl u my ashanti... i love when u got the thong on shakin ya booty... feels like cupid aint afraid to shoot me'... ever since high school i was ya cutie..... i love you shorty.thats tha truth see..... this relationship can neva fall apart... uve captured my soul..and taken my heart... ur skill level is high and ur flow is off tha charts... long nights in tha bedroom..thats where tha fun starts.... lets leave together turn off our phones... cuz i promise to love ya and neva leave ya alone... take you out ta dinner..butcant wait ta get ya home... baby girl im addicted to you u got me in that zone.. hook x2 verse 4 fluidmoon want to spend my time showing you, how amazing it is to know you, I could taste your tender kisses so pure like rain, I'm thankful i've met my soulmate to ease the pain, Remember this for if one of us should perish, memories of me and you together to cherish, you;ve been there always, and i want youforever in my heart, outside forces can't ever tear us apart, our love for each other could never stop, because i love you king, your my hip hop, hook x2 this song was writin by: shadow and fluid moon open mic of the month!
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07-24-04, 02:02 AM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin this piece of work.............................................. ....................
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07-24-04, 03:13 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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nice shit yall
<<<<<<<<<<wonders why he wasnt in this haha |
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07-24-04, 01:18 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 4289 77F4
uppin this, c'mon y'all............................................. .............................
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07-24-04, 03:30 PM
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
les go..uppin this shit..
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07-25-04, 03:32 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 4289 77F4
peep this hotness...UPPIN,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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07-25-04, 06:12 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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This was pretty good-- I liked fluid's verses better than shadows, but you both came straight---
Remember this for if one of us should perish, memories of me and you together to cherish, - i liked that and I liked tha closing bar too--- stay up 1.
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07-26-04, 10:09 PM
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
uppinnnn for feedbackkkk
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07-27-04, 11:27 AM
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
uppin..c'mon
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07-27-04, 07:01 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
ZZZZZZZZZZZ.......wake up plz, drop feedback.....ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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07-28-04, 02:22 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
Some Feedback Plz>>>>>>>>>drop A Link
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07-29-04, 09:03 AM
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
yea drop a link ill hit that shit up no doubt...
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07-29-04, 01:15 PM
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IP: E671 DE1D
Yo... this was some pretty good shit... Defiently feeling shadows a bit more just because he rhymed alot better... Both of you had tight flows... Good strucuture... Only thing is, is that a few parts actually did sound like Ja Rule and Ashanti... 7.5/10
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137958 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hit that up... Its my battle with Re$tricted... |
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07-29-04, 01:27 PM
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New Jack
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nice drop ya'll. I liked that it wasn't too complex, I liked both ya rhymes, both flowed well. you should make an audio of this.....I could even think of a track that would be perfect for it.
hit it up ya'll http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138209 thanks
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07-29-04, 01:28 PM
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$Thug Life$
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IP: 7113 B39E
yeah what he said and both ya'll did nothin but hotness
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