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MixTape 5 100.00%
Mentalz 0 0%
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Old 08-29-04, 12:10 AM   #1
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Mentalz vs MixTape

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.::MixTape(UE) Vs. Mental(CS)::.

This Crew Battle Has The Stipulation That The Crew Who Loses Has To Delete Their Forum and Can Never Reunite Their Crew.

::..Rules..::

15 Lines Minimum
26 Lines Maximum
5 Votes Wins
No Crew
No Hate
No D/R
No Biting, Recycling

Topic: Suicidal Contemplation

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Old 08-29-04, 09:38 PM   #2
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MIXTAPE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 09:38 PM.
 
Old 08-30-04, 04:23 PM   #3
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Mentalz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:23 PM.
 
Old 08-30-04, 06:08 PM   #4
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damn this shits crazy
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Old 08-31-04, 12:18 AM   #5
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static brain waves suicide they contemplate
this 9mm weigh's very heavy on my fate
as i put tha gun to my head...flashes of life start in rotation
pictures of my childhood now theirs...... *hesitation*
my whole entire life starts to flash before my eyez
my open casket momma leanin over percistintley cries
as tha picture fades and i come back to reality
if i pull tha trigga i'll be anutha statistic...anutha young fatality
but why do i want to live for all this suffering and pain
its to late now they'll put me in a instatution an diagnose me insaine
now i feel some sweat start to form on my........hands
my life is like god forgot to make any.........plans
i'm just a youth in a downward spiral on this planet earth
born premature its like they been tryin to kill me since birth
my prophicies were all complete like bein imprisoned
but this suicide i'm about to perform i did not vision?
but now me and only me i find myself at a crossroads
through out life ive been crossed by friends and foe's
but enough with tha talk my head's about to get caroted
i put tha gun to my head click........tha shit wasnt loaded?
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Old 08-31-04, 01:38 PM   #6
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And as the moon screams, and the light weens..
This young mans dreams erupt into a fight scene
And as the night cries to distract eye's..
His hand lets loose as three or more knives fly

But he cant sway at all or let his mind fade
Needs to consentrate to lower the crime rate
So he snaps back to set traps on track's back
As he maintains process and prepares & acts glad

Infact he's sad but would never admit it at all
Just as soon walk himself right through a solid wall
Percistance and chance swell to dance in romance
As he catches the train's prance in one quick glance

And as the smoke crests and all the billows smolder
His heart grows colder cos' he knows its all over
Rage fills and spills on hills crimson with blood
As he remembers the thrills from kills soiled in mud


Snapping back to reality the formality all dies
As the rumbling train echo's in night's dark sky..
Rolling over nearly consumed by the freights weight
He escapes fate & waits till he's filled w/ straight hate
His murderous methods beckon the very second..
Electricity's tweekin his brain waves..
He might be insane and deranged..
But he still remains, cold and unchanged.
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Old 08-31-04, 04:48 PM   #7
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Uppin' the battle. 105 Views 0 replies.


stop sleepin.
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Old 08-31-04, 05:44 PM   #8
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static brain waves suicide they contemplate
this 9mm weigh's very heavy on my fate
as i put tha gun to my head...flashes of life start in rotation
pictures of my childhood now theirs...... *hesitation*
my whole entire life starts to flash before my eyez
my open casket momma leanin over percistintley cries
as tha picture fades and i come back to reality
if i pull tha trigga i'll be anutha statistic...anutha young fatality
but why do i want to live for all this suffering and pain
its to late now they'll put me in a instatution an diagnose me insaine
now i feel some sweat start to form on my........hands
my life is like god forgot to make any.........plans
i'm just a youth in a downward spiral on this planet earth
born premature its like they been tryin to kill me since birth
my prophicies were all complete like bein imprisoned
but this suicide i'm about to perform i did not vision?
but now me and only me i find myself at a crossroads
through out life ive been crossed by friends and foe's
but enough with tha talk my head's about to get caroted
i put tha gun to my head click........tha shit wasnt loaded?
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Old 09-01-04, 06:52 AM   #9
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Voted For: MIXTAPE

Damn this was a good battle to read...both came real hard in their topic...both had a nice structure and flow to their verses easily readable i enjoyed both equally and i think u both will go far in the topical scene...Virtue i'm going with you purely because i felt you were more on point and at the end of the day...that's whats most important in these types of battles...Mentalz u came good don't get me wrong but the multies approach in this case was wrong in my opinion due to i felt you went a lil off point in places...other than that i'd say u were both pretty much equal on every other topic...nice battle keep doin shit like this it was real enjoyable
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Old 09-01-04, 10:56 AM   #10
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Just wanted to say tight battle to the both of you......but especially to Mentalz
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Old 09-01-04, 02:58 PM   #11
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Thanks for the feedback, my drop didnt get off point on any one line, look close and you'll understand the story. Thats ok though, nice vote, keep um' commin'
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Old 09-02-04, 09:48 AM   #12
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Alrite, I enjoyed both.. But Virtue got the battle won mainly for more content in his lines and an easier to follow storyline.

Vocab- Virtue
Emotion- Virtue
Multies- Mentalz
Readability- Virtue
Enjoyed- Both..
Vote- Virtue

But dude, you gotta change that font and color, thats hard as hell to read..
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Old 09-02-04, 05:55 PM   #13
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Uppin for simplicities sake.
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Old 09-03-04, 12:31 AM   #14
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gud battle.....stay up both of u..................
 
Old 09-03-04, 05:54 PM   #15
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uppin'.
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