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The Metaphor | 2 | 28.57% | |
bk 2 tha Future | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-12-04, 03:51 PM | #1 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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Bk 2 tha future vs. Tha Metaphor
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aight lez go
unlimited lines spit due 1 hour after checkin or DQ no crew votes, hate votes, or D/r |
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07-12-04, 04:01 PM | #2 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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IP: 972E 491B
check
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07-12-04, 04:50 PM | #3 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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yo check it
you need to go back 2 the future...and realize you wasnt a rapper/ you should change your name to powder...cause i leave you whiter than casper/ if you win the battle it'll be like a...retarded leperchon just dumb luck/ matter fact im practicing abastadence...so you know i dont give a fuck/ you a whack ass mc niggas smellin nuttin but your stinch/ dog you a bitch...you the reason they invented apachromine fitch/ they should call me ripleys...cuase belive it or not you lost/ leave your shirt colored...brighter than a macontosh/ i done wit this cat cuase im stuck wit writers solomn/ mind almost empty...as this niggas win coloumn/
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07-12-04, 04:52 PM | #4 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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its suppose to be im done
and my mind almost as empty
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07-12-04, 06:13 PM | #5 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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check
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07-12-04, 07:04 PM | #6 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: F0A3 744B
aight here i go-
i love rippin' stupid niggaz like you its fuckin hillarious you way to optimistic, i'll shoot down lika sagittarius that ripleys shit is one of tha most played out lines you should save your flow and send it to "pimp my ryhmez" see my lines knock you out your babrie chair time after time hits yo so hard its like i shoot tens instead blastin wit nines from tha opener to tha closer my flow is better your is a natural disaster like some real bad weather i probablly should stop now and waste time no more battlin me is pointless like tryin to impress a loose-ass whore your from not here, so that means you could be from anywhere they way you flow makes it sound like you a orphan straight outta no where you prolly abandon, origin a mystery like why humans have nose hair but fuck it really don care,this spit didnt rip you it made you break while you scared i show no fear like tha croc hunter witha snake your gay and,your mouth stay filled wit white shit like a hostess cupcake come on dawg i know yo ass is white shit your namez prolly jake ~closer~ this is it bitch you've reached the end of your rope you say you grimy but, i think you dirty as soap a sagittarius is lika a half horse half man, and its suppose to be a great archer look it up muthafukcas |
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07-12-04, 07:08 PM | #7 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: F0A3 744B
uppin for votes
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07-14-04, 07:59 PM | #8 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
only 19 more posts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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07-14-04, 08:00 PM | #9 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
only 18 more posts bitches lol....................
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07-14-04, 08:02 PM | #10 |
Banned: Cheating
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only 17 more hahahahahahahahahahahahahsashaah.....
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07-14-04, 08:21 PM | #11 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
props to both battlers on this one, decent entertainment. but here's the verdict.
the metaphor-decent structure i liked it. Overall subject matter kept to the diss, problem though. THE HORRIBLE SPELLING! lol. With text you gotta spell decently, because you got me saying, "Damn." and it's not because of the lines, i haven't seen bad spelling like this in....wait a minute ever! All jokes aside though, i liked this line a lot. if you win the battle it'll be like a...retarded leperchon just dumb luck/ that was nice. you made great use of 'metaphors' which is key. bk-decent verse, i liked this line that ripleys shit is one of tha most played out lines you should save your flow and send it to "pimp my ryhmez" because all in all, that ripley's line is one of the most played out lines. your is a natural disaster like some real bad weather but whwat was wrong with this verse, is that you had lackluster punch lines. You set the punchline up. "leave (fill in something) like-" you'd have us waiting at that point, and when the ''like'' came up, you handed us a weak metaphor. you lacked execution and creativity. but you came back with a decent closer that was the nicest punchline. just not nice enough to win you this one. vote=metaphor. please return the favor by dropping an honest vote on my battles(in the sig) |
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07-15-04, 04:09 PM | #12 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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IP: 972E 491B
thanks for the vote
uppin for votes please
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07-15-04, 04:18 PM | #13 |
THE COUNCIL
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Opener- metta
Closer- metta Multi's- none to speak of Flow- tough call, tie. Personals- one sided metta was talk'n bout bck to the future. Punches- Tough call i'ma say word cause he had more of them, that hit harder Wordplay- nothin overly comples. word processor though. Creativity- Word Originaliy- Word. DEDUCTIONS Bite'n- Feed'n- Overtime- Over bar limit- Other- Overall- Metaphore you had a nice verse with some sick punches but Word had more punches inpart cause he had a longer verse which goes hand in hand for having more punches, but no always. He used his lines right and hit almost everytime. Cause of harder punches he take this battle. Return the favour!!!!! Link Below!!
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07-15-04, 04:22 PM | #14 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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IP: 972E 491B
ight uppin for votes people
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07-15-04, 05:43 PM | #15 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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good votes uppin
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