check-it,
theres so meny trash nigga's on this roster
da cops i'll lock u up for being a garbish-imposter
where should i start, punching they heart
till they callaps, cuz honestly i've seen better lines in chuked

nah nah thats not how its goign down this time fuck that....
wait wait....
ok,
lets go......

fuck a confession learn ya lesson
or get burned with-no-concern in my agression
i'll piss in ya mouth so u can urin the perfection
to be named or mention, with a good stament
if u battled da mirra, u'll still lose agenist who u face'in
the cannon in my hand able to finish ya crew excistence
aint no nigga alive gonna servive the pain im inflick'ing
B.A.M like a call from a reef, check ya position
the type of hustler that got a mic-on... while the po-listen *police*
why the hoe-diss'in, cuz imma expose B.A.M poor vision
and this war-colision was my persistence
cuz B.A.M like penasonic batterys, lack'in the distence
them pass'in this mission, is like the pope slapp'in a christen
i could be laugh'in and limp'in, and stll be 10-steps ahead
and this crew flow can make a gang of islomic people touch-the-bed
i can make ya head-touch the led
and have ya brains "squirt blood", like a written crip-book-read
it's to late, ya so far behind theres no point to look-ahead
RAW-KILLA fuck what u said,
this aint the other site which is weak-wack N lames
and only got 10 members all of them is crew members i can-name
why complain, try and restrain the sorrow of my flow rain
theres so meny loser's in B.A.M its like u litterly KNOW-SHAME
so dont try and act "shy" cuz my "cruel intention" is to let ya back-have-it
these "ruff_tuff_thug's" couldnt have a devil'ish flow if u was cursed with "black-majik"
i'll leave ya with more holes in ya body, then a fucking crack-addicted
"kizza" aint shit like i had to use number 1 in the rest-rooms
impress whom?, cuz when "da prodigy" blow's up its just fumes
ya beef catagory couldnt fill a pup's bowl for-certine
cuz dog da best bitch ya got is just "emergin"
close the curtines, its ova so stand on the curve-man
cuz aint no way these boys could express the strenth of an emcee.... THAT MY "WORD-MAN"......

BANG BANG EARLY...............

ya corney ass son of a bitch.....
quit or die-as-rookies.....

B.een A.round M.en
B.asicly A.nal M.ashin HAHA

nice man and wus up wit dat signapture, cuz ya already got accepted by capitiol punishment

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IM BACK BITCHES

yo i want to start a click.dat would smash on ne body.get at me.yo u killed dem.1

nigga ima fuck u up u snkae ass nigga......diss like sum eminem....fred durst shit bitch...first u asked 2 do a callabo wit me through pm than u wanna join my crew in rapaddiction which isnt lame jus its brand new think bout it dis site got thousands of peeps da new shit got 100 sumtin rite now......nigga u a bitch im callin u out 2 show how much a bitch u r n e otha faggots wanna dick ride n dis my crew get at me
im through bein nice u niggaz carriers is gonna b literally dyin 2nite fuckin herb punk pussy mad cuz no 1 would battle him in da new shit .....lmmao pussy

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HAHAH u fucking lame....

i'll take out ya whole crew DOLO, take a step back clown
ya site is garbish, u'r crew is garbish, FALL-BACK befor punches-line i'll have u LEAN-BACK...

raw-killa nigga get it through yo head//
aint u realizin IE killed yo whole crew so no1 gives a fuck about wut u sed//
im like a bull wen i attack and nigga ur da 1 wearin red//
imma drive my lyrical horns right in2 yo neck//
so ill dislocate it from ya head//
so ull be jus like ya crew afta IE spit....dead//



uh oh u thoght i was dun uh uh niggaz!!!!!!!!!!!!

my lyrics ll leave bam crazy like dat cracka on dat mtv show//
diein by my gun da only way ull make a bet show//
my lyrics shine//
and yo's dun even rhyme//
its about dat time//
murked all ya lines wit all mine//
i wont shoot ya cuz ull missfire wit ya own 9//
and leave erry1 in yo crew diein of blood loss//
dun talk shit wen u got more losses den wins//
2 me ur a voodoo doll so ill stab ya wit pins//
2 bad dis aint a real battle cuz dis wud be my first rapverse win

yo ie g ahed batle raw mutha fucka unless u scared fukin pussy, yo we out!!!!

this was nice///good flow, nice punches and multies, nice structure,,,why yall replieing to his, but cant reply to mine...fags,,,but this was coo, keep doign ya shit, elevate more tho, some places you had choppy lines, like you gave up on rhyming it...but good shit

you suck intensify and you too pussy to check my diss on your gay ass

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^^^ i did and it was fucking lame and weak....

upp'in

“Best rapper” got stop and arrested my Hip Hop molested the creed
Of rich folks need to switch quotes wanna restrain and control
My brain holds me down, guess I’m a bold clown with a soul
Epidemic spreading no limit heading worldwide but I hurl pride
In my rhymes, best to create before they investigate my insides

N since then im 12-13.......

upp'in this for more feed back...........