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08-26-04, 02:49 AM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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Regretful Sins (((Topical)))
IP: C1D0 E666
REGRETFUL SINS TOPICAL
SELF REFLECTION Ungodly acts constantly surround me, my life is an injustice like government tax, I can’t shake these feelings or relax, I must change refrain from my unholy tracks, Nothing beautiful about my past but I’ll switch from sin so I can ”cross” gods path, My own words are beginnin to overwealm me n in this instance I might fail this task, MY MEMORIES My mind replays thoughts of the first time I wish I gazed into ya eyes ”jus once more” My soul cries, unbenounced 2 you my dedication, for you I would lay done n die for, My reco-lection of that day is burned into my memory n never gets fuzzy or faded, My heart is loveless just waiting for the day my love be reunited for my life n traded, REGRETFUL SIN Remember…. how anctious we was ta see each other that first day that I returned? We Both grew up and moved on but wanted to express all that we had now learned, Ya wrote a hundred and some pages about our life…….. before I even left that year, Were u Scared that id forget about U?, im sure that was your greatest of all ya fears, Shared tears and borrowed shoulders 2 cry on when we both needed a honest friend, But your voice has left n your body barried, and now I still feel like this is the end, I know we didn’t talk much lately…but I wish you were here cause I miss your touch, Abandoned this earth,rose above the stars..i now know I should’ve told you so much Not knowing if it was lust or love but ecstacy nonthe less was prodominately evident Unconditional caring, n innocencents that enchanted all these now are very relevant, I now believe this is my punishment for my wrong doings n trespassin against others, Biblical or logically I now know this..say what you say don’t delay were all brothers, I wish you were here to read this……”KAREN”………..that’s truly my only regretful sin, Cause when you died so did I, cursed to carry a body which the soul has died within, Last edited by DV8 : 08-26-04 at 03:04 AM. |
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08-26-04, 12:16 PM
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GoD LiKe
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IP: CEC2 D817
This Was Dope
Good Flowin And Good Content Peice Of Month No But A Runner Up Yes
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08-26-04, 01:01 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
dope piece, but the structue to me was hella hard to follow...nice content tho...I liked it...I dont think it would be a piece of the month tho...kep droppin tho dawg you'll get in there
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08-26-04, 06:40 PM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: C1D0 E666
thanks for the feedback.............uppin this once again..........................
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08-26-04, 06:52 PM
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IP: 7C6F 690C
it was tight but no...
runner up hell yeah...
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08-27-04, 04:45 PM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: C1D0 E666
uppin for feedback leave a name or link n ill get back ta ya n drop some feedback......
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08-27-04, 07:51 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo nice drop enough said peace i like it man 9/10
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08-27-04, 07:51 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
just keep it up your fuckin dope man!!!
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08-27-04, 08:13 PM
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<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: C1D0 E666
thanx for the feedback ya'll n ill keep droppin but i would'nt mind a topical vets opinion on this...where can i improve on it...ect.....
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05-05-05, 02:12 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
Wow, Looking Back At My Newb Work,.lol
. Rv Heres A Throwback For Ya.........
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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