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Old 11-10-04, 08:58 PM   #1
intensify effect
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trying to elevate my flow * high freestyle *

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i've been peeping madrapper stuff in open mic and hes sick with hes flow i think and people always my flow is decent but im trying to get my flow down-packed so when i actully think N use a punch i can flow it smoth N crazy so here go a high-freestyle for ya to judge N BASE IT ONLY ON THE FLOW..

i aint go for punches or noting JUST FLOW....
PEEP..

i got a intense sense that a few men wanna opose
with 4's N hoes who think they wont get smash with bo's N mo
then those average killah can send N hold in da cold
life toll is to un-fold a new path 2 grasp N dont step.. befor i blast
ya trash u'll get smoke like hash for dat cash while thinking about my past
that created this mental state-kid, with fire that look like im bake'in
but im pace'ing N make'in a new style for ya to take-in
base'in like addicts N get ya face in da attic while ya body get padded
my attiude da baddest, pink slip lose N ya'll be the gladdest
but this savage cant have-it...
cuz ya heart like pin-da-taill-on-da-donkey, trust i'll take a stab-at-it
take N shot at me?, hope u carry'in a automatic
cuz that jewlery is like... i auto-have-it,
N bullets is free..... so i feel u auto-have-it
splat ya adom, re-place it with ya nut... cuz u spitting like a dick
splitting this heck who persist to say hes lines are deadly.. while slitting hes wrist
holloween pass.. How u expect me 2 "treat this trick"
aint no peacefull-shit, cuz i'll keep fireing on ya block till ya street-is-lit
115-7 who streek is this, who beef is this
u'll brake ya ankle trying to follow my foot-step... who feet is this
FUCK.. why dont u greet this clip, while bullets meet-ya-lips
got ya body feeling like C-low the way u done TRIP... dont ask for me to get a grip
cuz that'll be ya last slip N dip.. into another HOLE like a clit.. BITCH.....


honest feed back BASE IT ON FLOW ONLY....
cuz i honestly aint focus on no punches what-so-ever ....
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