Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-01-05 at 01:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lyrical scripts has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 01:09 PM.

black out i will take your face a clout his trout
i will leave your rhymes cry thoughout you will need to shout
"lookin4crew" ya anit getting jack im just going to black*
cut the aslack u must be high on crack still cudnt rhyme if i gave u a stack*
your not worth the shit your rhymes worth not a bit they so dipromatical shit
you've got ya verser no ur gonna lose scared to click submit,commit this transmit

*black him out
*stack of rhymes

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Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 03:34 PM.

Huh? You wanna battle? Fukin noob, Lyrical Scripts//
Cum on Chris, your 12 years old, and da typical bitch//
Don’t fukin talk or clips get to ya wig//
Fa sho its splitting dat shit, don’t duck, bitch its still hitting dat shit//
you aint gonna survive once im blastin da tec//
you bastard, you said u aint, buh u "taking a chance" at death//

"unda his name it says TAKING NO MORE CHANCES"

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Uppin............................................. ..............................

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

uupn.............................................. .........

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Can we got some votes in here yall............Uppin

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Voted For: Blac-Out

vote blac-out....lyrical ur punches was kinda basic u had a personal but it was a lil weak...blac-out ur punches hit a lil harder and ur personal was a lil better...
vote blac-out
return da favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174786

thanks i got u, uppin.......................................

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Fuck Sake......................

Imma Never Get 3 ext Wins

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Voted For: lyrical scripts

this battle was kinda weak. didnt really see any killer punches or mettas that made me wunna drop my jaw. i think if these were audio, i wouldve prolly been more excited. but this was kinda weak.
i dunno why im gunna do this. but ima give this one to LS, even tho his verse was kinda softer, but i dunno. i was feelin his more. he had more personals in there, and better personals that made me wnna give him my vote. i think u should elevate a lot tho, cuase i wasnt feelin it that much, and it was kinda weak. ur lines were stretched. so i think u should work on that. and ur structure was off. but overall, i tink u came out on top in this one. i dunno, just my opinion.
BO-u had a nice verse, but i think yo verse was kinda played out. most of ur barz were played. i didnt see too muche creativitie in ur verse. but i was feelin tha structure. thats one up for u, but i think that wasnt good enough. i think u should elevate more on creativness and harder punches. ur punches were kidna soft, and didnt really land in tha right places.
overall-this battle wasnt all that to me, i think yall should work on a couple of things. yall not weak, but ur verses werent that hard. not too many punches landed in tha right areas in this one. but i still think LS came out on top, and snuck thru tha door with tha win....good shit LS

PLZ RTF ON BATTLE IN SIG AGAINST CJ....last link. PLZ...AND MAKE IT HONEST, CAUSE I HONESTLY EXPLAINED THIS SHIT....EXPLAIN IT PLZ...TOO MANY VOTES ARE GETTIN DQ'D....

but good battle, close one, but i think yall should elevate...NO HATE BO, just come a lil harder next time, thats all....its just one vote

^i wouldnt return that vote, or i'd get it taken off, cause it wasnt really that explained. but thats just me.....

REMEMBER TO RETURN THA FAVOR ON MY BATTLE AGAINST CJ YALL

Bullshit *cough cough*...........Oh ite thanks though for da honest feedback though lol
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA