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Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:42 AM

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Method. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 10:42 PM.

teknikal vuez has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 12:55 AM.

Ayo

Your verses are wack.. leaving ~few stressed kids~
cause you like constintly failing rules, in need of ~new methods~//
I ~said this, bet this~.. tell me this ~barage feels good~
and youll have more guys on the side of your house than ~garage sales in the hood~//
My ~stealth leaves you shook~.. you never knew ~Tek would rupture~
cause ya style abstrakt art, in desperate need of ~new structure~//
For that ~ill crush ya~.. leave ya eyes ~on the floor looking~
cause these punches light up your grill, like ~outdoor cooking~//
leave you a ~shook being~.. I got punches. ~sick in eye stuntin~
cause Method. drops more overatted than the ~quick reply button~
Shit ~deny something~.. Im Hot.. You ~spit in the cold~
so i put your fat on your forehead, so you ~know your role/roll~ //

Holla-Back

Voted For: teknikal vuez


METH
self inflicted wounds outloud laughter as soon as he steps in rooms...
he's a wet back like thrown water ballons kids more pussy then enternal woombs...
^^DECENT WORDPLAY .6/10.
duckin me like what if resistence ran?..existince period should be enough keep ya distince man
always feelin his taint hes got a persistint hand punchlines hit hard like o'neil an piston fans
^^again decent wordplay .5/10.
infected disease elton john reflected check his knees...kids expression sars..
rallys for disgretion for retards!.but like his rhymes neva hold up like dolly parton bras
^^ok. .5/10.

OVERALL sum decent wordplay, but ya lines were stretched.ya verse was too basic ,simple similies/wordplay in every bar.no real punches or personals....u prob can come harder than that tho.#

TEK
Your verses are wack.. leaving ~few stressed kids~
cause you like constintly failing rules, in need of ~new methods~//
^^4/10....BASIC
I ~said this, bet this~.. tell me this ~barage feels good~
and youll have more guys on the side of your house than ~garage sales in the hood~//
5/10.....BETTER
My ~stealth leaves you shook~.. you never knew ~Tek would rupture~
cause ya style abstrakt art, in desperate need of ~new structure~//
^^GUD WORDPLAY HERE 6/10
For that ~ill crush ya~.. leave ya eyes ~on the floor looking~
cause these punches light up your grill, like ~outdoor cooking~//
^^^MEH..AIGHT 5/10
leave you a ~shook being~.. I got punches. ~sick in eye stuntin~
cause Method. drops more overatted than the ~quick reply button~
^^GUD CREATIVITY 7/10
Shit ~deny something~.. Im Hot.. You ~spit in the cold~
so i put your fat on your forehead, so you ~know your role/roll~ //
^^FILLER 4/10

OVERALL. pretty basic lines.same as meth,not much in it really, but ima go wit tek 4 beta struc, flow and the most creative bar. Oh lose tha // in ya verse, peeps will put that against u.

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Voted For: teknikal vuez

nice verse nice punches vote to u tek

i meanur multies are dope how u string ur punches together and u are very smart the way u fuckin use personals on this dude u demolished this kat wit out even thinkin

method take lessons on how ot use punches form this dude ur shit was wack learn ho to use multies

nice verse again method elevate

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No Doubt Mang... Uppin For More Voters.. To Get Some More Votes lol..

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Voted For: Method.

i wasnt really feelin this battle, but my vote goes to method mainly because his structure was better, and he had a more consistent flow. decreasin your font dont hide your stretched lines though homie, instead of tryin to cram shit all together space it out so its easier to read.

tek, i know you was makin shit bold and puttin lines on words to signify that it was a punch,but you shouldnt have to do that, especially since yours werent that complex. next time try to make your structure where all the lines are around the same length, and make some more complex punches if you goin for the punchline style

check my shit out with a honest vote

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...765495&posted=1



http://community.rapverse.com/showb...765495&posted=1

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Voted For: teknikal vuez

oo shit nice drop mang...
ya first bar was a goos start N a funny one....
I ~said this, bet this~.. tell me this ~barage feels good~
and youll have more guys on the side of your house than ~garage sales in the hood~//
oo that was nice...

Shit ~deny something~.. Im Hot.. You ~spit in the cold~
so i put your fat on your forehead, so you ~know your role/roll~ //
decent ending fam...

all around tight drop good punches word-play was nice all around tight... 8.0

self inflicted wounds outloud laughter as soon as he steps in rooms...
he's a wet back like thrown water ballons kids more pussy then enternal woombs...
that was a good start as-well...

duckin me like what if resistence ran?..existince period should be enough keep ya distince man
always feelin his taint hes got a persistint hand punchlines hit hard like o'neil an piston fans
ha nice...

infected disease elton john reflected check his knees...kids expression sars..
rallys for disgretion for retards!.but like his rhymes neva hold up like dolly parton bras

ending could of been better....

MANg i HATE TO VOTE ON THIS CUZ U BOTH KILLED IT... I WOULD PICK A TIE IF THEY HAD THAT OPTION...
shit is close but....

imma go with vuez hes punches was more hard hitting and raw...

and thats the only reason why i picked u...
method had good vocab N i thought ya was even with creativeness.....

danm ya both even N are tight battler much props on both emcees...

Good Looking Family... And Good Looking To Method. Cause This Battle Was Pretty Hott.. Bump..

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dope drops....... like the multies in both and some of the punches... i wont vote cuz tek is tryin out for my crew, but keep it up both of u

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