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Old 01-27-05, 06:25 PM   #1
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Gansta Shit

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Young Mix is back mothafuckas(12x)

Im one of da elite,yall niggaz just decievin ta rap
and think dat you can buck wit da Mix,you'll be recievin a slap
I got dese rap niggaz on they knees wit a dat
Im da illest in dis fuckin rapgame, just leave it at dat
Im gettin krunk wit some trees in da back
and dese lyrics'll delete yo ass til all dats left of ya is a sleeve and a hat
And I leave dese niggas petrified
man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
And fuck wit my clique,Ill explode bombs all around ya ways
cause dat 4 pound'll straight leave you on da ground fa days
Yo,dese niggas is wrong fa thinkin they label rocks
cause dem niggas be rockin more wires than a cable box
So nigga,ya neva had a chance but my record made it
and fuck wit da champ,Ill have yo head and body separated
And dese niggas holdin they breath,yall need ta inhale truly
cause in dis rapgame,Ima Man On Fire like dat Denzel movie

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Look,nigga,dis is gansta shit
I gotta ak50 ta thank ya wit
Dese cats dat rap be spittin wanksta shit
yall niggas need ta get outta here cause dis aint ya shit(wwwhhhhooooaaaa)

Yall cant fuck wit me,get ya mothafuckin headright


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Old 01-27-05, 08:30 PM   #2
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yo Mix u r hot come to A.T.R. and try out for the crew
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Old 01-27-05, 08:49 PM   #3
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Ayo thanx and Ill get back at ya wit dat
More feedback on dis please

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Old 01-27-05, 09:34 PM   #4
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Old 01-27-05, 10:09 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Marvelis
yo Mix u r hot come to A.T.R. and try out for the crew


Hope this was a joke, cause that shit is funny man.

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Old 01-27-05, 10:28 PM   #6
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Nigga,dis was some ill shit,betta than anything you can come up wit
Speakin of come up wit,where yo song at
You'se a fuckin hater,I can tell yo shit is wack from yo name bitch
so you can suck my dick you garbage ass hater
You wouldnt be sayin all dat hard shit if you seen me,so you gotta talk hard on da fuckin Internet,nigga ,fuck you wack ass bitch
Dats real shit
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Old 01-27-05, 09:57 PM   #7
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um you need better vocab an complexity.......it was basic......
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Old 01-27-05, 10:08 PM   #8
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that shit sucked fuckin' ballsack, and you didn't even spell gansta right. So generic and just fuckin' retarded. Everyone who has read it now is that much shittier of an m.c. just for having been exposed to it.

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Old 01-27-05, 10:57 PM   #9
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I just left honest feedback. Besides i could just drop a terd on my keyboard and just hit enter after whatever jibberish came up and it would still be better than your shit.

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Old 01-27-05, 11:03 PM   #10
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You know what,its ok.I feel sorry for you.You 21 still rappin on a website plus you ridin one of da most wackest rappers Talib Kweli's dick.So drop sumthin
since you said it,back it up,cause I just wrote shit dat rhymed,so you do sumthin.Lets see how wack yo trick ass is.
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Old 01-29-05, 01:10 PM   #11
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You know what,its ok.I feel sorry for you.You 21 still rappin on a website plus you ridin one of da most wackest rappers Talib Kweli's dick.So drop sumthin
since you said it,back it up,cause I just wrote shit dat rhymed,so you do sumthin.Lets see how wack yo trick ass is.



am i the only one that caught this? did this kid just say talib was wack? ahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahha hahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahhahaha hahahahhahahhahahahahahahhaha hahahhahahaha .................................that comment speaks for itself....it just lets everybody know that you suck........if u have a problem with that....fuck off.......and take this criticism and run with it and be willing to elevate.....it was too basic...just like everyone is saying....dont use so much gunplay....nobody likes that...pick a topic to write about....you used decent multis....but seriously....thats not all that a verse consists of.....if you used those multis and there was a topic behind it....it could have been a nice piece......but unfortunately is was all about your gun and yourself.....so take this and make something good out of it....if u think im trying to diss you.....i dont care....but if you cant take these people opinions...you will never do anything with your music
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Old 01-29-05, 01:15 PM   #12
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Ok then,vote on my other one then,if dats wack,then I wont say nothin but thank you,even if you do diss me
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Old 01-28-05, 12:03 AM   #13
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that was incredibly simple....need 2 up that shit man
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Old 01-28-05, 01:50 AM   #14
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links??

first of all,this is tooo simple. Your topic is played b/s. your onm about the same shit the next man is.This would of gone better in self glorification cypher.4 real.

You have alot of room to elevate.'

man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
this line is stupid, you havent showen any lyrical skill, or any imagination.

anyone can write. im a shoot you i got gun play for miles im this im that your wak im good.
but it doesnt actually prove shit


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Old 01-28-05, 01:51 AM   #15
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