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12-22-04, 10:27 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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when iam gone
IP:
When I am gone will you miss me,
or will you twist my memories with disbelief, when i AM gone will you cry for me? or will you lie about my life to those who will listen, when I am gone will you still miss me, Or will you find another fishing buddy for you're weed? When I am gone will you still love me??? |
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12-22-04, 11:55 PM
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yawn
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IP:
Short and deep, the repatition was used well... Pretty good.
Return the favor? Appreciated. Final Kiss
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12-23-04, 01:34 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
thnx I do what I can lol thnx for the feedback.
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12-23-04, 10:03 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP:
wow, this is pretty short, but seriously one of the best i've read from you lol.. good job man..
9/10 return the favor plz http://community.rapverse.com/showt...313#post1840313
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12-27-04, 02:16 AM
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Is F'in Bored
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IP:
hey i made a song called "when i'm gone you'll miss me" that was fire
now ain't that funny |
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12-27-04, 09:14 AM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
yea I did not know that I just sat here and typed away cuz in the fut I might be going into the arm services. peace
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