(my b-day is april 16th)

life is cherishable,so to all you fools then - get wealth in retribution-
cause to kill me is to only make me stronger - Death is evolution-
well producing this is only a prong up on this long ladder of mine-
cant see the top, or the last prong - but its only a matter of time-
that i gather the mind to explore the unseen - more than just feet-
but miles up i look forward to see my life in its stride, or in a leap-
a leap to heavan or hell - if such places even exist in this life-
i presistantly stride for Prong 16 while resisting the strife-
i cant choose to be what i truely feel but still i learn on this-
because the fork in the road is a mere straightaway with sharp turns on it-
i try and gather up all my strength to reach this prong ahead of me
but it seems my body's not letting me - and my arms are getting wea-k -
These are my thoughts on Prong 15-it seems this prong is long,but long for what?-
i cant step down cause ill regres and i step up cause im not strong enough-
so not by choice - i stay still until i can move on with dreams-
and thats April 16th - on that day i can reach the even longer - Prong 16-

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171473


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171130

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

dat was pretty good man, story was brough about, juss work on flow
8/10

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171312

uppin

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171523

uppin for some more feedback

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

this was pretty good man...flow was a bit off but you had some good lines in there...overall this was a good peice...nice shit...8.5/10

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12

MADD I’m in a min-skirt do plenty dirt with a tinny flirt
My alphabet soup is a wet scoop of coochee stays alert
Thugs and studs try hug me, buys bubbly talk lovy dovy and insert
Cock in my box that’s the trick of a dick got to be quick
Not afraid to parade in suede or get laid a wet and brave chick
The DJ sound represent my rent I spent it on perfume for my room
Panty removal make men proud get an approval from a crowd I assume
Fact divine not an act of crime look boo I’ll take a wine glass
Damn girl fine ass and sexy lips thanks messed up his mind fast
“Thighs sweaty” he think my pies a wetty “hair long” this affair can be long
“love your lips” this thug a trip “you got club hips” he wanna rub and grip
“what you do at home?” he wanna screw and bone, oh wear a gown and read script
“girl you a hot cutie” he think I you pot booty beat you can draw and sing
you got a raw thing boo true? Well decide after the ride “aw girl I wanna cling
to your juicy thing I bet the wet hairs around you brown thing so slick”
I’m gonna lick it so hard and deep you’re gonna scream sweet and quick”
“Damn girl I bet you got butter candies what color your panties?” You
don’t know do you boo? “true” “ your coochee is like a toy wind look
make me your boyfriend The DJ was pinning from beginning to
the ending the flames of MURPHY LEE and JERMAINE DUPRI
my body hot and shook coochee cook so I ask the DJ what the hook gonna be
girl I don’t think MURPHY LEE need a hook on this
Oh RHYME his cock jumped I see a hot lump in his pants as we romance

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171433

uppin for some feed back on this peice

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

mad rappa y in god's name are u rapping in here? lol

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he did that in another Open Mic - homie's trippin hard

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

lmao! yea he is....that was funny....well this had a really nice flow to it but i didn't get the whole - thing....i dunno maybe it's me.....but i like this a lot.....but you feel off at points in the middle but you picked it up again.....good shit man.....good shit....keep spittin your "Flamin Barz"
lol peace i'll get the link for mine in a sec
8/10

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