|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|||||||
| View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
| dfunk |
  
|
0 | 0% |
| Elementality |
  
|
5 | 100.00% |
| Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll | |||
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
03-25-05, 04:15 PM
|
#1
|
|
|
Elementality vs dfunk
IP: E410 F375
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding No Hate Votes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-28-05 at 04:15 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
|
|
|
03-25-05, 04:16 PM
|
#2
|
|
|
Guest
|
IP: 07B7 57F6
dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 04:16 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
03-25-05, 04:23 PM
|
#3
|
|
Light Weight
|
IP: 07B7 57F6
Nigga you need some morphine to calm down /
Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground / How many times have i already broken ya neck ? / Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check / On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses / You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D / You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee / Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy / Elementality you far away from reality / I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* / * Jet = Jet Li , the actor * Sub-Zero = Mortal Kombat Character * fatality = finishing move in MK
__________________
dfunk |
|
|
|
03-25-05, 04:24 PM
|
#4
|
|
|
Guest
|
IP: E410 F375
Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 04:24 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
03-25-05, 05:29 PM
|
#5
|
|
|
IP: E410 F375
For those who dont know this kid just can't flow I mean check his rec his only win... is a no show Just look at his spit this kid thinks hes true O.G Hes just a weak ass bitch who cant recite A to Z His intelect is so out of date, when he spits come out ancient The shit you try and burn me with just makes us all impatient You wish you could stop the violent force of my mentality I'll make you so unstable you'll start rockn beastiality
__________________
 |
|
|
|
|
03-25-05, 05:39 PM
|
#6
|
|
Light Weight
|
IP: 07B7 57F6
Uppin this.. show luv..... lets gooooooooooooooooo
__________________
dfunk |
|
|
|
03-25-05, 08:18 PM
|
#7
|
|
|
IP: E410 F375
..................................................
|
|
|
|
|
03-25-05, 08:33 PM
|
#8
|
|
|
in your system
|
IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Elementality
wordizzle....pretty gay battle here dfunk...i see you improved from your last battle...but still needs alot of elevating....your lines and punches are too basic, they need more punch to em man, plus, everythin is either played or weak as hell "How many times have i already broken ya neck ? / Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check" not a punch man....fake personal and its stupid....so, try to think of shit that will actually diss the guy, and make people laugh and go, ahah, he got owned, know what im talkin bout....because alot of your shit is just random fillers...it got ok at the end...but the fatality line has been done before element....not bad...first verse here i see.....you gettin my vote because you actually hit with a punch...and a personal i think....so, basing of that........thats all really i have to base off....you can still elevate alot....because you had some potentials in there, but wordplay was kinda gay....so it ruined some....but you have nice stuff...just elevate....word v/elementality
__________________
this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
|
|
|
|
03-26-05, 12:37 AM
|
#9
|
|
Light Weight
|
IP: 541B 925B
Thanks for the input Kesse. I appriciate it. Will try to get better.
__________________
dfunk |
|
|
|
03-26-05, 01:29 AM
|
#10
|
|
|
IP: E410 F375
Yes, thank-you. Upping this battle for some more votes.
|
|
|
|
|
03-27-05, 03:44 AM
|
#11
|
|
|
IP: E410 F375
.................................................. ......
|
|
|
|
|
03-27-05, 10:10 AM
|
#12
|
|
|
IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: Elementality
Elementality... For those who dont know this kid just can't flow I mean check his rec his only win... is a no show Good personal/punch...7/10 Just look at his spit this kid thinks hes true O.G Hes just a weak ass bitch who cant recite A to Z Eh...nothing to special....6/10 His intelect is so out of date, when he spits come out ancient The shit you try and burn me with just makes us all impatient Good flow, good use of vocabulary...7/10 You wish you could stop the violent force of my mentality I'll make you so unstable you'll start rockn beastiality ...Self glorification/kinda a punch...good vocab...6/10 [B]Overall: 26/40 dfunk... Nigga you need some morphine to calm down / Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground / No to this punch....4/10 How many times have i already broken ya neck ? / Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check / I don't think you ever broke his neck, and this punch sucked....3/10 On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses / You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D / Doesn't make any sense at all.....3/10 You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee / Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy / This was probably your best punch...and it wasn't that good...4/10 Elementality you far away from reality / I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* / Self-glorification is fuckin' gay....3/10 Overall: 17/50 Broke it down and Elementality came harder....so.... Vote: Elementality |
|
|
|
|
03-27-05, 12:54 PM
|
#13
|
|
Middle Weight
|
IP: 3354 DAC6
Voted For: Elementality
EL WINS...... BETTER STRUCTUR, U HAD BETA EVERYTHING REALLY, FUNK YA SHITS TOO BASIC........ ELEVATE
__________________
ATTENTION RV USERS
vote on these and a honest vote will be returned re~verb vs legion (topical) re~verb vs shard (text) |
|
|
|
03-27-05, 01:27 PM
|
#14
|
|
|
IP: E410 F375
up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
|
|
|
|
|
03-27-05, 01:33 PM
|
#15
|
|
|
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 989C F949
Voted For: Elementality
Elementality For those who dont know this kid just can't flow I mean check his rec his only win... is a no show Just look at his spit this kid thinks hes true O.G Hes just a weak ass bitch who cant recite A to Z His intelect is so out of date, when he spits come out ancient The shit you try and burn me with just makes us all impatient You wish you could stop the violent force of my mentality I'll make you so unstable you'll start rockn beastiality like some punches work on structure good attemppted punches need to elevate more 6.5/10 d funk IP: Nigga you need some morphine to calm down / Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground / How many times have i already broken ya neck ? / Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check / On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses / You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D / You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee / Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy / Elementality you far away from reality / I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* / like sum of ur lyrics used punches at good times nice structure u also need 2 elevate very sad battle but my vote goes 2 elementality v/elementality ay yo check out my battle vs kid kapone hit up sum feedback and a vote vote 4 da betta battler HOLLA!
__________________
 LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2)  Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
