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Old 05-10-05, 08:03 PM   #1
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Quick Flares...Send Bodies Shoppin 4 Routes To Heavens Stairs
Yes, Ack Got Dat Crack That 'Swell Cilla' Until Each 'Nostrils Fat'
On Point, Sure, Exact....Ya'll 'Under Tracks' While I 'OVER-LAP'!
Give Dicks A Wack?..I 'Prevent Germs' From My 'Colgate Plaque'
This Shit You Lack, I'm Itchin For Water Like A 'Purified Scratch'!
Sink Kids Wit Shots................Wash Ya Children Up Wit Bullets
Knock Out Uncontrollable Nuts....& Disrupt Da Dickheads Fluids!
Trig Blast Spit Gats Through It, Jus Lay Down You About To Fall
Toss Niggas Guts 'UP Da Stairs' Then Drop Em 'DOWN Da Hall'!
Motions...I Neva Pause, Faggots Fuck Wit Me Dey Catchin Sars
Literally Catchin Sars, Cuz My 'Jails Cancer'...Like 'Deadly Bars'!
Sniff His Drug You Losin Arms.........Get High Off Ya Own Limbs
Ack Shoot Chests-In, Then 'Feed Em Trees' Like Appetizer Timbs
Smokin Ya Flesh.......Puff Combs......Nigga I'm Brushin Ya Flesh
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Old 05-10-05, 08:12 PM   #2
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damn...Ack yur sick wit metas lol...structure was PERFECT...only seen better from OneStepBeyond lol...9/10...rtf
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Old 05-10-05, 08:18 PM   #3
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now dats a illunatik right there!...rite, u put it down right here...LFS said it fam...structure and metas was hot...we gots to collab...PM me when u think of sumthin to go off of my nigga...4real
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Old 05-10-05, 08:30 PM   #4
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tru get me on that shit...
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Old 05-10-05, 08:33 PM   #5
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Damn Ackrite, you know ya drug game huh man??!

dope rhymes, man.....mettas an the wordplay was sickerning, flow was right on point, fuck what people say like ''yo da structure is tight''...like that matters, lol...but yeah, flow, mettas an wordplay was sick, an the concept of the peice an the playin around with drug related rhymes was DOPE lol....keep it up fam, solid drop.
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Old 05-10-05, 09:20 PM   #6
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damn...Ack yur sick wit metas lol...structure was PERFECT...only seen better from OneStepBeyond lol...9/10...rtf


Lol Good Lookin Nigga.......Yeah I Peeped Ya Shit.......Replied Too & Yeah Scream At Me About Da Collab
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Old 05-10-05, 09:22 PM   #7
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now dats a illunatik right there!...rite, u put it down right here...LFS said it fam...structure and metas was hot...we gots to collab...PM me when u think of sumthin to go off of my nigga...4real


Jeah Fam.....ILL All Day......Had To Put It Down For Da Crew Feel Me......But Jeah Scream At Me For Dat Collab......I'm Down
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Old 05-10-05, 09:24 PM   #8
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Damn Ackrite, you know ya drug game huh man??!

dope rhymes, man.....mettas an the wordplay was sickerning, flow was right on point, fuck what people say like ''yo da structure is tight''...like that matters, lol...but yeah, flow, mettas an wordplay was sick, an the concept of the peice an the playin around with drug related rhymes was DOPE lol....keep it up fam, solid drop.


Jeah @ Da Structure Lol....Of Course I Know About My Drug Game....Always, But No Doubt.....Its A ILL Thing Feel Me??
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Old 05-10-05, 10:10 PM   #9
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big!!!!
that's my rappin type I dunno why niggaz say this ain't creativity... the best structure..
these one gets a 10 out of 10... good job
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Old 05-11-05, 04:29 PM   #10
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Old 05-11-05, 05:02 PM   #11
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yo sickness man sickness...damn so much thought Im coughin..*cough cough* lol

I enjoyed this one...keep doin ya thing man...is that u in da sig?...(prolly a stupid question,but u never know)
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Old 05-11-05, 05:34 PM   #12
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Good Looks Nigga.........Yeah Thats Me In Da Sig..........Gotta Be Original Feel Me?


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Old 05-12-05, 08:25 AM   #13
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Old 05-12-05, 08:47 AM   #14
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i thought this was real creative....flow was on point you had a nice structure, nice vocab usage and usage of multi's....a nice drop stay up fam
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