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08-04-05, 11:20 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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All I Have
IP: 4673 04CC
-death.
the personification of both immortality and weakness that gets our message etched in stone but renders us speechless -life. the lord grants us this for our deliverance but some of us just waste our time abosorbing more ignorance -hope. the future, both life and death that thru faith permits us to believe there is something left to believe in' that makes some men go mad and abandon all reason the idea that one day, out this hell will be leavin' exchange this perpetual winter for a new season -my word of any virtue u might find in me the one that remains constant's my honesty -my balls u may call it valor or bravery but i call it balls to get this shit up off my chest and then recite it for y'all and if u want to hate on my shit, u don't like it at all 614-575-1337 be a man, nigga give me a call
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08-04-05, 11:24 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 4673 04CC
my link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501
my poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201395
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-10-05, 06:12 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice poem, heartfelt and some powerful words, i was feeling this alot man, lol @ "give me a call"..and posting the #..you might want to take that shit down, some freaks may call you..but yo, good poem, stay up..1..
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08-12-05, 12:02 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 4673 04CC
good lookin' on the feedback and advice. i think i'll leave my number on that though. i love when my fans get in touch with me.uppin for more feedback.
my link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501 my poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201395
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-13-05, 01:58 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 4673 04CC
uppin' for more feedback
my link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200501 my poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201395
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-16-05, 09:30 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6CD7 CCA3
shit was dope....nice flow and vocab.....i liked the way u broke it down into parts as well...good imagery as well.....keep doing ur shit nigga.....8/10
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08-19-05, 03:10 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
good lookin on the feedback and welcome to Trigga Town
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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