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Old 07-26-05, 02:24 PM   #1
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Secrets. By Stanza

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..Secrets..

Im Letting The Unknown Thoughts hender Me
Living My Life In This Obscene world Of Secrecy
Many Secrets Have Already been Revealed
Many Have Not Yet To Be Out Spokenly Spilled
People Have Secrets That Only God knows The Details
People Tellin To Tell? Instead of the Fables We tell
Secrets brings up The Question In Mind Like
..Does Kobe Bryant Have sex With Girls that Are White?..
..Does Vin Deseal Really Play With Little Kids Toys ?..
..Does Michael Jackson Really Fuck With Little Boys?..
..Question Like Is Bill Cosby Going Against The Blacks?..
..And Does The Government Give A Little & Take More Back?..
Yeah Those are some Serious Secrets Some Preknown
Some Get Thought of & Debated About In The family Homes
Stoppin Me Because My Secrets Are Scary Enough
Ive Left innocent People Unfound Like Diamonds In The ruff
No Matter How Young or How Old We Begin To Get
We All Have Some Kind Of Deadly Unknown Secret

Feed Will Be Returned
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Old 07-26-05, 02:28 PM   #2
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..And Does The Government Give A Little & Take More Back?..
^yes they do

this was nicely written....short and sweet...Duabs and I were goin to do a topical Battle about Secrets....

I liked how yu Brought forth that many times Questions survive off secrets...that was my favorite part of this.....

keep writing

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Old 07-26-05, 02:35 PM   #3
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ayo keep em come in homie!!!!!!!!im up against you in the punchline league!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RTF mine...............called ATTENTION EMCEE'S!!!!!!!!!ur flow was good vocab and imagery!!!!!!!!!8
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Old 07-26-05, 02:37 PM   #4
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Old 07-26-05, 02:46 PM   #5
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Drop a link foo!..or this will be closed
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Old 07-27-05, 12:16 AM   #7
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liked this man, really good, flowed well, topic was very good and creative, a lil short, but it didn't have any effect on it, keep it up man..........and drop a link on this, don't want it to be closed, lol, good stuff


if you want to RTF links are in my sig, keep it up man
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Old 07-27-05, 04:53 PM   #8
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Thanx Yall Ima RTF'z Now and I will drop a Link In A Few
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Old 07-27-05, 04:56 PM   #9
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Old 07-27-05, 05:00 PM   #10
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its good like the imagery and vocab is good structure and flow aight but tis pice dont show enuff of emotion in it but its still good......and the topic i felt u want good with the topic as well and how u ended it wit a suspense wit a deadly unknown secret its good really enjoyed reading this piece........
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES........
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Old 07-27-05, 05:05 PM   #11
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nope..........................lol................P lus i cant vote on none of yo battles bcuz im on They blacklist and stuff so
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Old 07-27-05, 05:09 PM   #12
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ohhhhh aight then, then jus leave feed on my OM then made a new one go check it out
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Old 07-27-05, 10:59 PM   #13
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..........................................U;ppppin ........................
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Old 07-28-05, 10:52 PM   #14
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Yep............................................... .....
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Old 07-28-05, 11:56 PM   #15
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202092 (can drop a line if you want to)

Try be brave corrupt and fiery but gave up entirely on
Randon notes and abandon hope on becoming a rapper strong
Rumbling through chapters wrong try find my page
And a divine stage in my life I’m lost mind in rage
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