Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
07-27-05, 04:07 PM | #1 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
quick verse, let me know what you think
IP: 7FF7 43DA
How can one day be so perfect and the next go so wrong
I guess it always happens so that I can write a new song But, oh well, what’s been did has been done I’m standing up sending praises to the Son What? You don’t know Who He is, He’s Jesus Christ What you think He was some kind of demonic poltergeist He’s right the opposite, lives in heaven and is called superb Declaring Him as anything less is nothing more than up surd He’s the only perfect being, creator of the whole universe He’s the only reason I even wanted to write this verse He conquered death for everyone in the entire earth So we might live with Him in heaven and have a new birth Giving Him my soul was the best thing that I could have ever done Cause in Him the true and final victory is already been won I try and give Him all my problems and pointless fears And pray that He will hold me tight and wipe away all my tears He’ll do the same for you if just surrender all to Him Come into His light and step beyond all that is dim Let Him write your name in the Lamb’s Book of Life And He’ll be there to take away all your pain and strife http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2323964
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
07-27-05, 11:03 PM | #3 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: 554A 541B
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
07-28-05, 10:28 PM | #5 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: 5585 84DB
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
08-01-05, 12:23 AM | #6 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: D8B2 7902
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
08-01-05, 02:08 AM | #7 | ||||||
New to RV
|
IP: 9801 3B1B
7/10...............
liked the subject. good flow.......................... god bless...................
__________________
|
||||||
08-01-05, 02:14 AM | #8 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 28AD 5545
hey man nice drop good flow nice vocab......slow start strong finish keep progressin 7/10 return the favor on my open mic....peace
|
|||||
08-01-05, 11:03 PM | #9 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: 7E95 CD30
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
08-01-05, 11:09 PM | #10 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
|
IP: 1A70 8B26
I like this. Played Concept though. I liked the approach. You had good emotion. It was overall The best aspect in your verse "Emotion"...Imagery is good, i just say put metaphors and similies in it..To expand your imagery more complex and more "Deph" in it..But Nice drop.
Return a fav in my newest OM "Traking Lives" Links in sig...Thank you.
__________________
mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
|||
08-03-05, 01:07 AM | #11 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: F65F AFC0
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
08-03-05, 01:55 AM | #12 | |||||||
RV aint Dead
|
IP: 57E6 2ED4
i like da subject, urs was on
but nice drop dough
__________________
|
|||||||
08-04-05, 12:51 AM | #13 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: EE4D 34B1
__________________
i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
|
||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|