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09-24-05, 02:41 PM | #1 | ||||
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"End of my life" - Intermental (brings a tear to me each time)
IP: ABA2 5B8F
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208881 and http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208733
www.soundclick.com/intermental 1st or 2nd track called "End of my life", its real emotional, cos this track conveys a real deep thing to me, its summin that you guys want find too emotional...but youll get the message...holla atcha boi
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09-24-05, 02:47 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 78D8 9469
DAMN BOI you improved -_-bitch how come i aint improved?lol anyways great flow good lyrics good beat hu made the beat? you seemed to never fall of the beat its ace feelin it
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09-24-05, 02:49 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: ABA2 5B8F
thanks man, Ozone made the beat, I apreciate that and you are improvin
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09-24-05, 03:13 PM | #4 | |||||||
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iite beat is kool... hook is pretty niice... wow you've improved alot.. this is the emotion you need on this type of track... lyrics are kool... i like this track man, hook again.. feelin this alot man imma d/load this to my mp3 you've deffo improved.. flow is a bit iffy in the hook i just noticed and its a lil bit off on some of ya verse but its no biggi its a real nice deep song props on improving man imma push it sayin u at a 7.5 keep goin man you'll get dere soon
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09-24-05, 03:15 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: ABA2 5B8F
YESS dope thanks 7.55... im gettinb there...thanks EC, holla
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09-24-05, 03:58 PM | #6 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
levels sound right
flow sounds on lyrics are good and delivery fits the beat, yet again good track dawg...and the hook is good for this track 7.5/10 stay up BD |
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09-24-05, 04:03 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: ABA2 5B8F
Thanks BMM lol...i apreciate that
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09-25-05, 03:32 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 3CE8 982C
uppppin.................
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09-25-05, 11:35 AM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 7E0B C1C3
upppin........................
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