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09-27-05, 07:02 PM
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Hell yeah
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Tell Me Why(My First Real Freestyle)
IP: F91E FCB7
yeah i tryed,
www.soundclick.com/speatsproductions Tell Me Why Freestyle imma still keep practicing I left feed on both of status's songs My Status and If I Had Last edited by Speats : 09-27-05 at 07:06 PM. |
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09-27-05, 07:10 PM
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Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
Damn pretty good free man....i couldnt understand some of it....
first part you came in good....but didnt finish real strong...... beat is dope as shit though....u make it?
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09-27-05, 07:24 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
i like your lil hook you did on it, the beat is real tight i think your voice fits these kinda beats better. your free overall was good nice job wit maintaining focus on the words you were using. Your breathe control could use work, cause really thats the only reason i could till its a free. i bet you was sweatin mad rank haha, anyway nice lil freestyle man. dont quit!!
 can you rtf on ym track "can't nobody" its somewhere in the song forum.
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09-27-05, 08:04 PM
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#4
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Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
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09-27-05, 08:06 PM
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Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
where u get the beat foo?
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09-27-05, 08:13 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
shadownville, check this out http://www.slantize.com/downloads.htm
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09-27-05, 09:53 PM
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#7
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Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
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09-27-05, 10:35 PM
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#8
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Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
all them songs i left feed and no one leaving me feed
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09-28-05, 02:35 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 149E 323C
im feeling the beat...but ur voice was low...anyways yeah nice flow..u went smooth on this 1..u've been on this more than me so i cant tell u what to make better and what not...but on my opinion...u good..keep doing ur thang
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09-28-05, 07:39 AM
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#10
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Hell yeah
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IP: F321 F0CD
thanks really apreciate it
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09-28-05, 07:47 AM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
iite this beat suits you real well.... the lil fing at the beggining was nice..... lyrics are decent for it when u flow its a you sayin all the syllabless like.... syll-a-bles... but overall its not a bad free man keep it up;.
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09-28-05, 04:44 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 82BE 624D
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09-28-05, 05:04 PM
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Champion
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IP: 6A0E 2FBE
iite peepin im likin the beat, got a lil hispanic feel to it....I know you broke wit yo girl...so I know this got emotion, lyrics are good, however ure kinda tryin to push words in, but its a freestyle and im feelin the flow....keep up
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09-28-05, 06:04 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 23DF D68F
not bad...not bad at all...like they said ya voice fits well with these kind of beats..u did kinda fall off at the end but thats how most frees are......nice tho........feelin it....7/10
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210033
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09-28-05, 07:45 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 62B3 9910
thanks man really appreciate it
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