Battle Rules:

6 -8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko
4-1 ko
* The Person With The Most Votes After:
(1). Either Way of Ko
(2). 15 Days

Automatically Wins The Battle And The 50 Post That Was bided

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-05 at 07:32 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 05:38 PM.

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 05:43 PM.

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satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be
votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie
nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation
girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation
go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did
and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid
kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning
even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning

uppin............................................. ......................

Voted For: Satans Spawn

Satans Spawn

You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness
Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness
Ehh.. Decent..
You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women
Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining
Not worded into a punch..
Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission
And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing
Nah..

Legend

satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be
votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie
Nah..
nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation
girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation
No way.. Didn't connect..
go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did
and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid
Played to shit..
kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning
even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning
Ehh.. Not very good at all..

Overall, I have to go give this to Satans Spawn. That "weight off your ass" line was pretty decent.. everything else was either worded wrong or just not good. Whereas, Legend's whole verse was either not worded good, played, or just not good, period. So, when it comes down to it, Satans Spawn's 1 good line was enough to win it for him.

Vote - Satans Spawn

Legend, sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

this was a pretty weak battle imo

legend.. sorry to say you aint no legend.. your punches barely connected and i lost count of how many times u saud soul in your verse. it wasnt the worst verse ive seen but it was pretty bad... up your vocab, and use better concepts for your punches also work on wording them

satans:

pretty weak verse also, you did win but your punches were pretty played.. i know u got it easy but it still dont matter if u go hard it only makes u feel better anywayz work on your wording and set up lines

v/ satans spawn

keep elevating

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Satans Spawn Verse

You Gonna Be Catchin AIDS If You keep Hangin Round my Sickness
Im Knockin The Weight Off Your Ass Worste Than Physical Fitness
^ blah not feelin it 1st line played and 2nd line self glorified

You Winning This Battle Is Lightly Expected Like Opra Dating Women
Your Never Gonna Finish Me Off Yo Ass Barely Got To The Begining
^ hmm ok but not really strong i seen a lot better

Im Comin To Steal Kill And Destroy..Bitch I Live to My Dads Mission
And You'll Never Come Big To Win ..So Its Like Your Dick Is Missing
^ hmm ok closer the my dads mission bit i ain't really get but was ok

Overall
Average at best flow and structure text wise are aight but nothing amazing stood out plus it was only 6 lines...i'd expect something raw seeing as much wasn't needed to write

Legend Verse

satans whackest spawn is what your were made to be
votes will go lower than the aftermath of the first spawn movie
^ hmm flip on the name but coulda been a lot better

nigga sold his soul so he can be a rhyming sensation
girl wanted him to sell his soul so his sperm can spawn during ejaculation
^ blah not feelin fake personal and not a very decent bar

go out and get a fucking life just like your momma did
and go make mistakes like yo momma did having you kid
^ momma disses...omg...na...not feelin sorry

kidaint got no soul but think hot wit his lyrical churning
even if you was hanging wit the demon himself you still wont be burning
^ closer average...nothing amazing though

Overall
Ya verse was basic...rhyming was basic layout was not all over the place but wording could of been better to assist the layout...i wasn't feelin the bars as much as S.S's to be honest he had average disses...and your's (8 lines) nothing to me made me go ohhhh ya feel me...keep at it though you'll improve as time goes on

Vote: Satans Spawn...

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..................And thats 3-0 KO and 50 Post added to my post count

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