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DaTrusHurtz (1-0) vs. DoContinue (1-0)
IP: 6EB9 28C9
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(TeamOne)
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IP: CA8D 04EB
ooh ... we get our own little sub in here.... whooopie!!!
check baby... how about two lines each? |
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I Hurt.
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IP: 49B0 4F0B
hmmmm, why sure, two lines sounds fine
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I Hurt.
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IP: 49B0 4F0B
You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo |
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(TeamOne)
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IP: 6F79 1B5B
cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve
cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude... |
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 564A A007
You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo LoL...I been thinking of using a line like this in the past,just never used it...anyways... Photo is a picture..that comes out of a camera.. If you said Emimem Drawing.....then it would have been better.Becuz a drawing is art,photo is not.So...you dropped the ball in wording it.. cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude... ^^Wtf is this?...Honestly,this was too weak.Like the rhymin...but ur content was shit. SO,DTH fucked his concept up with wording it..but Doc dropped garbage. If he dropped something decent,then he would have got this easy. V/Datrushurtz |
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(TeamOne)
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IP: A21B BC67
i dont think u understood it... bc you wouldnt have said wtf is this... i could see if u didnt like it tho... but do u get the wordplay? craps (dice game...) roll on... chance, gamble... nuff said
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Light Weight
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
v/ DTH not great from either but his had a better concept and was overall better in my opinion
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
Your line was weak DC, work on your.........WORDING, your like most cats, good concepts, but they can't word their concepts. You know? Well, I gtg with
v/DTH |
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
Voted for DaTrusHurtz
DTH, lol I liked the concept and regardless of what NK says, "Photo's ARE considered a type of Art". The wordplay was nice and overall the punch itself had the element of humour in it to. ![]() DoContinue, "Da truth" nameplays on DTH are played to fuck. The wordplay in the second line was nice with the "craps/chance/gambling" concept, but that was the only plus to the bar. The punch in itself was average and it wasn't really funny, that is why DTH's appealed more to me. V/ - DaTrusHurtz |
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Insane in the textbrain
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IP: CF51 8482
You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo ^^corny as hell but wordplay works and is quite funny vs. cant handle datruth? i wont give you a chance to improve cuz style is craps, so roll on, wit me you just gamblin dude... ^^ok wordplay, no real punch to it v/DTH
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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IP: F019 583F
Hahaha, I laughed pretty hard at DTH's punch..
Vote: DaTrusHurtz |
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IP: F019 583F
^ Yeah, that's me by the why. Forgot I was on that name.
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
v/ truth good enuff to win
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
You won't ever be a threat to me so get away ya homo
I mean your idea of Martial Arts is a big Eminem photo this wasnt even that good and sadly the best punch in this battle |
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