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Old 04-25-06, 09:38 AM   #2
Fendi Fiasco
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can i get some feedback ... i have been peepin more than 2 others for each of my posts

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Old 04-26-06, 12:30 AM   #3
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damn u gotta beg to get some feedback out this bitch
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Old 04-26-06, 01:28 AM   #4
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..loving how the beat came in..like your laid back style on the beat..you sound comfy on the mic..like u been at it for a while..only beef i gots witcha track is that it sounds like u have a slight lisp. the chorus was dope. keep postin...could use another dope fem around.
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Old 04-26-06, 01:39 AM   #5
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quality needs mad improvement....you need a lil more energy...though it is a laid back style, you need to seem like your feelign it more.....not bad at all tho....flow style was good tho...you rode it pretty well....i dont like your accent much....or maybe its that your too loud on the beat.....lyrics arent bad at all....cocky style thats normal but you seem like you actually feel it and arent just writing about it...thats good....you got a good start to this shit.....just keep it up, n learn how to mix....go to the audio help section n read some tutorials
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Old 04-27-06, 09:35 AM   #6
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Listenin...

ur flow is nice

u need more mic presence though...and work on articulation


ur delivery fit the tone of the track nicely


keep droppin


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