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08-03-04, 10:05 AM | #1 | ||
~CharT ToppA~
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*now elevated*
IP:
now elevated by: 708 of... N.O.K.
{look at me... what u see... i'm alot betta den what i use 2 be i drain niggas quicker den dracula and im stronger den hercuules} when niggas here 708, they no longer think of MCI they think of me, my rep, and they see a MC high open mics roll of my toung quick like spit i jus get a pen and paper~ and write down shit dats it i'm done~ not wit rap~ i dunno what u heared~ i'm done wit herbs~ me caliph,ILL,death,hot,troop,dot and prod~ got a way wit words~ why im tellin u dis shit?~ you prolly here bout us all day~ anyway now who da fuck~ aint here da hot shit NOK bring out~ everyday? ~we damn near been here a week~ and already we got niggas dat speak...~ ~..shit about us~ mostly garbage crews ~ mostly niggas we beat~ ~now i really don't need...~ ...tryouts from niggas that feed~ ~if u cheat, quit rappin ~ and only be a nigga dat read~ {if u kool tryout~ and i'll check u out~ if i got time.... be careful cuz one fucked up line... and u'll be declined...} yo if u a vet do u think i can be rookie of da month? 1st feedbac on my verse... ...den say if ur gonna nominate me... if u do dat i'll appriciate it... ~1~ |
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08-03-04, 12:59 PM | #2 | ||
~CharT ToppA~
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IP:
yo uppin 4 some feedback ppl.....
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08-03-04, 01:14 PM | #3 | ||
$Thug Life$
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IP:
not bad acually its preety good. you are great. yo check my song do you
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08-03-04, 01:35 PM | #4 | ||
New to RB
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IP:
Your freestyles written and I bet your beats are cheap/ your pac style spittin' but your flows are weak
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08-03-04, 02:08 PM | #5 | ||
~CharT ToppA~
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IP:
ummm lol wuz dat your review or was it jus u fuckin around
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08-04-04, 02:21 AM | #6 | ||
~CharT ToppA~
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IP:
yo im hungry for sum feedback
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08-04-04, 03:07 AM | #7 | |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP:
its alright kinda reminds me of my style without all the punches though..lol..was this freestyled or written...it kinda looks written,but honestly you were just makin statements so its kinda hard ta critique if ya get what im sayin...this was more like an intro 4 ya crew..your vocab could be a bit better n your flow more consistent,overall i thought it was good though...check these out...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724 me vs 650 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106 me vs sten.cell http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi |
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08-04-04, 04:26 AM | #8 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
it was wack no vocab structure was off
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