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04-25-04, 07:56 PM
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Iam The American Dream
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coupla bars
Wherever u to scared to go nigga I been there// With a grinned stare// dissolve into thin air// Normal nigga on da out but a rebellious REBEL INSIDE// Call me DAUNTE cuz even the DEVIL MAY CRY// I’m back and STRAPPED with TACTICAL-STUFF-AGAIN// And hence the name RAPS-RADICAL-RUFFIAN// I am immortal nigga no WEAKNESS KNOWN TO MAN// Got the world fallin down the never endin DEEPNESS IN MY HAND// My palm is forever torn// strong as a leather thorn// And this is juss the calm before the storm// I am immortal, my blood has never been seen// Never will be nigga, I’m the AMERICAN DREAM///////
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-26-04, 12:19 PM
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IP:
yo gimme more feedback and leave ya link or the name of ur open mic and i'll give u some feedback also.
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-26-04, 06:16 PM
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IP:
yo i need more feedback yall come on and drop ya links or titles i'll hit ya bak
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-26-04, 06:44 PM
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bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
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yo i liked that verse, that really u who wrote, i give you mad props,
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04-27-04, 07:20 PM
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IP:
yo thank yall for the feedback but i need more........
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-27-04, 07:54 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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Good Flow and would have been better if you contenued Cat...Expanded more...Keep dropin - Peace.
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Blow It - Topical -=Respect List=-
Crhyme Sindicate  The unexamined life is not worth living.
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04-28-04, 11:56 AM
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IP:
i want some more feedback holla back
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-28-04, 12:11 PM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP:
nice references esp. the Dante line
um...flow was a lil choppy here or there rhyming was coo...but woulda worked better with a better flow not bad dawg 1 |
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04-28-04, 12:45 PM
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IP:
yo lemme get more feedback yall holla at me
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-28-04, 01:41 PM
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New to RB
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IP:
that was tight man
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04-28-04, 02:23 PM
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IP:
that shit was tight -props- maybe we could collab sometime hit me up
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beezy crew fo life 1 love live life 2 the fullest HOLLA @YA GIRL beezy crew from life to death n when I die put the colors across my chest  
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04-28-04, 03:54 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
yo lemme get some more feedback yall come on
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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