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04-26-04, 12:42 PM
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Light Weight
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Think for Yourself
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Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times
Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind Then society will find that its in need of some help... So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself Programmed into roles... indifferent to if we lead or follow Full of sorrow for the fact it seems even our time is borrowed.. Morals swallowed... Eithics erased... Everything still set on race... Expressionless faces... increase of idiocy and trying to keep pace.. Is this how we rate? An imperialistic... power driven state? One run by a man with a reading level of barely 8th grade... Yet we tolerate... Back a bufoon... Hate who we're told to hate... Declining mental states ignorant to how our ethics dissipate... So set a date... the day when you will finally open ya eyes... Grow to dispise... How everyone but us controls our lives Its time to wake up and see the signs of the times Time to rewind... Then fast forward to V.2 of mankind Then society will find that its in need of some help... So just do us all a favor... Start to think for yourself
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04-26-04, 08:28 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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I enjoyed that one too, Native...I wish it was longer though.
Keep dropin cat.
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Crhyme Sindicate  The unexamined life is not worth living.
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04-28-04, 11:07 AM
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Light Weight
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dont sleep
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04-28-04, 11:39 AM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP:
nicely rhymed
good lyrics 7.5/10 1 |
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04-28-04, 12:28 PM
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IP:
yo tite shit dawg, nice peice, good point, nice flow, nice vocad, aight hook, but woulda been better if it was longer....
holla back at mine I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-29-04, 10:08 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
Up.
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04-29-04, 01:14 PM
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Flyweight
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I Was Feeling The Whole Concept Of That Flow And Im Gonna Agree With Mentalz I Wish That Shut Was Also Longer Playboy.....1
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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04-29-04, 01:55 PM
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IP:
Very nice. I'm glad it was short I'm not in the mood to read an enourmass post right now.
The message was very clear, and the chorus flowed very nicely. The flow in the verses was kind of choppy, but for a text drop it doesn't matter as much. Overall its a pretty nice verse, although you could have used some multis to help the flow And if you could please leave feed on a keystyle called "Adrenaline In My Head" Peace
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04-29-04, 02:05 PM
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IP:
nice flow B is was hott shit
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04-29-04, 02:38 PM
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IP:
hey man that was totally top man. you droppin sum nice shit here, keep up the good work.
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05-01-04, 01:53 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
Up.
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05-01-04, 02:04 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
Yeah, the shit was pretty tight..... I think the flow was off a little but not that bad. The emotion behind it was strong and it showed. I also would have liked to have seen it longer.....
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05-01-04, 09:43 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
I may write another verse for this at some point
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